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please pleas eplease please please
write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please this is on of the best sotrys ive read on aff
you are an amzing author
please write a sequal

This fic was delish! Cannot wait for the sequel!

Delicious, sneaky Slytherin badness. This isn't mere smut (although, it's not like smut's a bad thing) - the plot is worthwhile and our Snape is in character - hot and sexy as hell. I highly recommend this work!

Hi again! I've just finished reading the whole story and it's AMAZING! The story is gets more and more interesting by every chapter and I can't seem to be able to keep my eyes away of the monitor!
I was really surprized to know that Helena was actually Malfoy's daughter! Yikes! Spooky!! and Lewis is just a ........!!!!
Snape surprised me with the presents! He bought PRESENTS FOR A RAVENCLAW! And taught her to fully transform herself into an owl.
I am out of words. This was wonderful! Snape really changed by the time he marked Helena. He suddenly became loving and caring, although he didn't show it. I just love that kind of men.
One thing amazed me though. Helenan't n't seem to care about Snape being tortured by the Crutiatus Curse. I was hoping to see her hug him tightly and say some nice words to him about how she felt, but that didn't happen.
Anyway, I'm anxiously waiting for the sequel :) I hope that you'll be able to write it soon :)

I've just started reading this :) I've read chapters 1-10 and I must say that I really like it! I can't imagine Snape as a swan, though. Too softy! He would've been a good raven or even a crow! Anyway, I liked the bed part. He can't seem to resist himself with her :) and I really-really liked it when he told Helena that he liked her but he doesn't trust her. That was so remarkable of his side. So Snape-ish!
I'll read as much as I can again tonight! I can't even concentrate on my own stories while I'm reading this...lol!
Once again, good work!!!

I am very much enjoying this story. I look forward to reading more.
M

After reading "Don't Lie to Me" I was hooked. So for the past two nights I have eagerly come home from school/work and read "Secretly Slytherin" until bedtime. I LOVE it!! Helena is as real to me as any character from the books, even more so than many of them. I HAVE to know how Severus protects her, and their unborn children, from Voldemort. Also, I need to know how they manage to survive after Voldemort is defeated. Please write some more, or at least tell me if you aren't going to finish this. This is definitely one of the best stories I have read so far!

Usually I get very distracted and picky over grammar and spelling errors, but I found that you had so convinced me and 'caught me up' in the story that I just overlooked them. I am worried a bit that you have boxed them in - but you have been cleverly getting them into and out of situations well enough so far, that I have decided to have faith in you that you can accomplish this task through to the end.


I will say, however, that the story has become a bit darker and less humorous as it progressed. I think I might like a bit of humor added in to give it a bit of relief from the sheer intensity. Oh, and BTW, that little foray into the sublime (I think it was after Chapter 4? - Not certain, anymore), was hysterical. You have a natural sense of humor!

At any rate, I am a fan of yours, and really hope you pick up writing again!

I just wanted to say that I adore this story. It\'s had me giggling since I started reading it.

Never really put Snape into the romance novel hero class, personally, and when I started reading, I have to admit that I had my doubts, but I think you\'ve done an exceptionally believable job of it. Very good. The Death Eater scene was fantastic, too. I don\'t think I\'ve ever read a Death Eater scene that was so true to the form established in GoF. You caught tood ood so well in that; made it clear it wasn\'t a game and it wasn\'t something Helena was ever going to forget she had done.


Incidentally, one thing I keep noticing: You\'ve referred to sherry as a red wine several times. Sherry actually ranges in color from pale almond to deep amber. The most aristocratic is very pale, and very dry, and the sweetest, dessert wine, is very dark, almost caramel colored. The one you might associate with an English aristocrat is a golden color, sweet but not so sweet as a dessert wine. Just FYI. ;)

Best of luck with coming chapters!

Razz

I absolutely LOVE this story. as a matter i\'ve read everything you wrote so far and love it all. I\'m really hope that you write another part to this story. you finished it off just perfectely for a sequal. please please right another one!!! you\'re writing style is great!

Well, that\'s it then. I\'ve decided I\'m going to move in with you. So that I can delicatly prod you each and every day untill you start a sequal to this story. *nod nod* I\'ll start packing today. Just one question, do you have a waffle maker? If not i\'ll bring mine.