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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - what a fantastic, brilliant story. I really enjoyed reading about Helena, instead of Hermione, with Snape, for a change. I love Hermione, of course, but find I\'m beginning to get a bit confused with so many different versions of her and the various different accounts of her de-flowering - the poor girl seems to
lose her virginity every few nights!
Helena is almost a female Snape in her ways. And your sex scenes - I think they must be the most steamy and varied I\'ve ever read. You must have had some amazing lovers - that\'s all I can say! The way you write your sex scenes is very different - lots of surprises, unusual ideas and tasteful use of language (in my opinion). Sometimes I find what you write very erotic and sometimes I just stare at my screen in voyeuristic astonishment: sensitising potion; transfiguring wands into handcuffs; S-shaped pubes (LOL); Avian contraceptive (LMAO); Snape happily admiting he enjoyed receiving anal sex! And that astonishing bit where Snape put his own pre-cum on his tongue and kissed Helena - the fascinating details keep on coming (sic).
One thing that concerns me is that I seem to remember that you stated that you have written a HG/SS story, although I haven\'t read it yet. Presumably, for Hermione to end up with Snape later, you will have to do away with Helena - unless the two stories are in no way connected. Helena\'s death scene could be very poetic and impressive but I\'d find it upsetting - she\'s a great character.
Another thing I appreciated is that your Voldemort is genuinely horrific, which he needs to be.
Thank you for providing me with hours of not-so-innocent amusement.
lose her virginity every few nights!
Helena is almost a female Snape in her ways. And your sex scenes - I think they must be the most steamy and varied I\'ve ever read. You must have had some amazing lovers - that\'s all I can say! The way you write your sex scenes is very different - lots of surprises, unusual ideas and tasteful use of language (in my opinion). Sometimes I find what you write very erotic and sometimes I just stare at my screen in voyeuristic astonishment: sensitising potion; transfiguring wands into handcuffs; S-shaped pubes (LOL); Avian contraceptive (LMAO); Snape happily admiting he enjoyed receiving anal sex! And that astonishing bit where Snape put his own pre-cum on his tongue and kissed Helena - the fascinating details keep on coming (sic).
One thing that concerns me is that I seem to remember that you stated that you have written a HG/SS story, although I haven\'t read it yet. Presumably, for Hermione to end up with Snape later, you will have to do away with Helena - unless the two stories are in no way connected. Helena\'s death scene could be very poetic and impressive but I\'d find it upsetting - she\'s a great character.
Another thing I appreciated is that your Voldemort is genuinely horrific, which he needs to be.
Thank you for providing me with hours of not-so-innocent amusement.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Please, oh please, oh please! Write a sequel. This was wonderful! You have a gift. Very, very sexy. Excellent writting. I could go on and on...
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love your stories. and i\'m so glad you didn\'t make snape onto a prissy lovesick greaseball. and your little parody was so funny i fell out of my chair i was laughing so hard. thank you for writing such a wonderful fanfic. lol.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you had me woried there for a second. Whew! I thought this was about to turn very dark. I am glad it does not seam to be heading it that direction, yet.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Dear. God. That was the funniest chapter ending I\'ve stumbled across, in *any* form of the written word. Thank you! Your snarky sense of humor and brilliant writing are very much appreciated, and the sex scenes make me wish (even more) that I could clamour into Hogwarts for a go with the Potions professor. Though I would definitely tie him up...maybe you will, later in the story? Here\'s to hoping.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! Couldn\'t stop reading!! Please please write a sequel!!!!
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI.. YOU\'RE JUST GREAT!! I\'M GLAD YOU MADE A CONTINUATION (OR WHATEVER, MY ENGLISH IS NOT VERY GOOD) OF \"DON\'T LIE TO ME\".. REALLY WHEN I DISCOVERED THIS TALE HEHE.. I\'M GLAD ANY WAY.. KEEP ON WRITING..
HAVE A NICE DAY... ;)
HAVE A NICE DAY... ;)
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story rocks! Sorry I haven\'t reviewed yet... guess I\'ve been a \"lurker\"... following along faithfully, & loving every line - yet was never considerate enough to take a few minutes to review! Please forgive! Snape is in character TO A \"T\"!!! I also really enjoy the way that Helena chooses to deal with him! I liked the way it started out really light & kind of carefree... now that they\'re more involved things are getting a bit... er... sticky. Snape definitely isn\'t a man who comes with no baggage! LOL! Fantastic story, you\'re writing style is flawless, it flows together so smoothly & is really easy to read! Congrats on an excellent Snapefic! Thanks for writing it, it\'s been a great read!!! (Also has inspired me to get to work on my own - which seems to be stuck in the mud at the moment!) - Kenz
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all of your stories rock, but this one is the best! not only great sex but the plot twists and jaw dropping moments make a fantastic story. i was up till 4 reading this. plus, the funny parts kill me, the parody was hilarious! keep writing, you are so excellent.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey these stories are great!!! i usually stay up half the night trying to get the next chpt. so what happens now??? there needs to be more and more and more!