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Hey Trisha!!!
The other site is going crazy so I came to read the new chapter on this oneVeryVery good one, by the way!!!! SMUT FEAST!!!! I was missing it!!!
I can't imagine what you are going to do with the party at the Malfoys!!
SS is always a good read! i love your writing!!!
Frini

Third review.
Wow. Now that I've finished what there is (whine moan....I want more pleeeease) this is brilliant. Really brilliant, and I have read a lot of fanfic in my day. It ranks with the Hellhound series in Blake's 7 fandom. Sigh. Snape and Avon, two of a kind.

Anyhow, there is a small mistake, in that in Book 5 (1995-96) Snape would be 35 or 36, not 43. He and James and Lily etc. were born in 1960 or '59 depending. Look in the lexicon for that information. Otherwise, it's really good. Great, actually.

I have been careful and savored this slowly, like a good liqueur. It stands the test. Keep up the great work. Thank you for the wonderful stuff. More please.

i'm reluctantly reviewing because i want more. greedy eh?

i thought 'don't lie to me' was funnier - i screamed with laughter over my 'puter like Snape when she transfigured into an owl, with the 'don't lie to me', but SS is deeper and more complex perhaps. your writing is totally fascinating, the sex is gripping (he he), the characters spellbinding and the narrative captivating. i really like the way you have taken the character of Snape and the issue of sex rather than fluffy romance, but have taken it beyond that into something deeper, darker, funnier, more beautiful. admire your writing. hope that you have or will put it into your own stuff.

now can i have some more?

LMAO, I am deepy in lust with this particular version of Sev. This guy I can see what Helena sees in him. Keep going before I suffer withdrawals.

I just had to get my two cents in...after I'm done bowing down before you. This story is one of the best pieces of fan fic I have ever read and I'm not a newbie at reading fan fic either. I liked the Harry Potter books okay but I wasn't a huge fan. One day while reading some other fan fic I browsed over just curious as to what kind of fan fic was being written for Harry Potter. I read ystorstories and now I'm a Snape junkie. I am so thrilled you added two new chapters....YAY!!! Please *groveling at your feet* will there be more? Love it, love it, love it...

Second review.
OK, I started this story just for the sex, but you have succeeded in sucking me in (pun in tended) with the intriguing mystery you have created. Not to say that the sex isn't great!

Helena is a wonderful character. Just what old tall dark and greasy needs. And he certainly won't mellow with her around. I am glad you are adding chapters. It's really good.

This is heavy hot filthy shit, and I love it!!!!!!! The parody is absolutely wicked. hehehehehehe. You sure have a way with Snape, and Helena isn't bad either. She certainly isn't a MarySue. No more like Lolita crossed with Madame deSade. Anyhow, I am savoring it a bit at a time, and it's well worth the wait. I loved the first part, and the second part is certainly living up to press clipppings. Keep up the good (bad) work.

Good plotting, grammar, dialogue and all that technical stuff also. I am tired of badly crafted well plotted stories. Bad grammar turns me ofAll All my former English teachers are turning in their graves now.) And you write a good fuck, which is an art. Not to much, not too little. Sigh. Back to the story...................

Hi, just got done reading the story. Liked it. Wondering if there were going to be anymore chapters coming or if Chapter 36:Aftermath was the last chapter?