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T you you so much for that wonderful story! :)

I loved every part of it!

Now for the sequel! You don't know how relieved I was to know that you're going to write a sequel.. thakyouthankyouthankyou!

I might be obssessive but.. I'm checking every night to see if youe poe posted something new..

Please, please. Hurry..
A Fan..

~N~

I started reading yesterday and read all day into most of the early morning! I have just finished and must say-- Well done, Well DONE!
You have done a great job with all the characters. I can here those from the movie cast just as if they were speaking the words. You have captured Snape as a reluctant hero and god help you bastard. The sex is, is well great, and interesting each time not just "oh well time for sex" and throw the same old stuff in. I hate to type so I have tried my best to give you some feed back. I hope we don't have to wait long for the next story. You should be proud of some very very good work. If this was a book in a store I would have bought it! I will say I do need a happy ending and will not waste my time on a story that ends badly for my main hero type characters. I know that is not the real world and everything is always going to have a happy ending. That is exactly why I look for them in my stories. The real world is not always a pleasant place. One does not want to spend time and energy in something that lets you down.

Thanks for the stories.

NO!!!!!!!!!!!! it cantbe over! sequel sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love your story! gret jo.......find time son, we're patient, just not that patient, :) . great story!

Ouch, poor Helena. I am very glad that you finished...wait. NO I'M NOT! These last few chapters were wonderful, wonderful, and I cannot wait until you have the sequel up. By the way, I loved the ending. Er, the desk part, the betrothal was sort of funny but the Voldemort sucking the life out of their first child certainly wasnt...are you sure his real name isnt Rumplestiltskin? I really, really dont want to think about my granmother knowing about my sex life...or sharing hers. Ick:D Still, I like her grandmother's true character and what happens after Helena leaves. Altogether, this was such a clever, poignant, and just plain good sequel, that I am fervently wishing for the sequel to the sequel:)

Fantastic story. I was burning the midnight oil to finish this story. I coulden't stop reading it.

It is wonderful. I never thought, that the pornography may cause so much feelings. Please, do not stop to write. I am sorry for the bad English. You Snape is magnificent. Many thanks.

Thanks for the kind reply, and the new chapter. About that Blake's 7 story, The Hellhound Series, it was many years ago and in print. Before the days of computers and internet. about 1989-91 or so. OK, computers existed, but not the internet. The zine was Southern Seven, before they started publishing on their own, and I don't know where they are now or what they have done. It was an AU, with Avon in our modern Earth and it was really good. I am an "old" fan, been around since the first slash story, read it in the first edition, too. And if you want Snape to be older, NBD to me, but you did ask about details, and I just wanted to help. Besides, Helena won't care about a few years here or there.

Helena is a great character. Keep her in mind for something original someday, because she is too good to let go. Jean Lorrah and Jacqueline Lichtenberg started in Star Trek Fandom, and they had quite a few books out. Jean Lorrah's two Savage Empire books have two characters who are thinly disguised Avon and Vila. Anyhow, keep in mind about doing original stuff and going pro, because you definitely have the talent. This plot is amazing, and I am as interested in that as the sex. Really. There is too much dreck out there nowadays. I am a classically raised SF and Fantasy fan. I like good plots and well done stories, not repetitive shlock and gimmicky strangely written cyber punk stuff. Neuromancer was great, but lately it has degenerated into crap.

Anyhow, keep up the good work, and I am really interested to see where this all is going. OK, you can't probably do the total defeat of Voldemort, but hey, you can still do a whole lot otherwise. And yes, it is a long time between books. But fanfic keeps us all sane and interested. And thinking. Your fan, Amanda

My goodness; you've no idea how damnedly *difficult* it is to get a hold of this story! Thats all right, its so good that I certainly didnt mind having to go check four different sites until I found one that worked and all. And since its been a while since I read this story, I got to read three whole chapters and it was very nice. I was quite worried when Snape asked her to leave; I dont want this story to end. Wonderful job, and I hope to see the next chapter in the very near future.

It is referred to as the dark mark not the death mark.

I do not believe he is a total bastard. He plays the part very well. If he were a total bastard I do not think Dumbledore would have given him his trust. Especially, when it comes to the safety of his students. Moody seemed to be a surprise to him, but the other DADA teachers it seemed like he set it up. He wants Harry to learn to fight. pe, pe, it seems, is trying to protect Harry... though it is in a bastard type of way. He really is good at being bad. I do enjoy your story. Imagine, smut with a plot. It is a shame you can not publish.