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if i was harry i would kill off those bastard that are making him do that!! please update soon i just gotta know if harry will find someone to love him and his soon to be kids!!

I would love to read the rest of this and i hope it gets better for harry

I hope this is the worst spot in the story. Ministry-assisted rape and torture isn't entertaining. With this as an introduction to both sex and conception, Harry is going to have difficulties in the future. I wouldn't be surprised if he attempted suicide because of this. I will read more when it's posted to see if you can pull something like a happily-ever-after out after this since I'm morbidly curious to see if you can pull it off. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

I love it update really soon okay and that's an order!!!!

Oh, wow. I hope your-wow. I hope your going to give poor Harry something like a happy ending. Just wow. Its really good, just a little, uh, stunning? I just want to keep saying 'wow'. Shocking I guess, because its so original. Like I had the story all planed out, because most of the other stories here are so the same, but THAT ending to chapter four certainly wasn't what I expected! I don't know how to tell you how great it is because you usually compare fics with others like it. Fics mostly write about the same thing (ex. 'marriage law challenge' there

The story's interesting . . . I'm intrigued . . . hope an update comes soon!

This story is awesome; I can\'t wait until you finish it. Have a great year.
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Wyome & Vineeta

This is the, I think, seventh time I\'ve come across this fic, the first time was quite a while ago and I still have the same question: where is the rest?

Ecellent story, though I wish Lucius had been put in a better light. Hope it\'s a nice guy for Harry\'s forth, someone like Sirius, though I know he\'s dead, or think so. Or maybe Remus, or Ron. Please continue.

this ery ery interesting. please write more. is great.