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for Don't Lie to Me

by Veresna

person lacy
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm I smell a sequel.. lol She pulled a fast one on him... Fun story and I loved how it moved a little \'slower\' before it got into the kinky stuff. Made it more fun, that whole antisipation and foreplay thing ya know? Well had fun reading this, parts left me grinning ear to ear.

off to hunt up another. later
person RickyRoo
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is without a doubt my very favorite story on any website. I realized that today when I found myself reading it for a third time. :P
You write so well!!!
Thanks!
~ Lara
person D\'Artanyan
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That\'s cool, I like it. I can\'t wait to read what happens next!
person Clare
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This is really good!!! NC-17\'s are usually plotless, and all the same... But this one definately stood out!!! And the main charactor wasn\'t a Mary-Sue for once! Yay!!! Good job, I applaud you.
person GiGi
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!!!!!! brilliant! one of the best fics i\'ve read in awhile!
person jen31972
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story - please continue!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is some of the most intelligent, realistic erotica I\'ve ever read. Keep it up.
person severuslucius
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is a gem! I love your original character and I\'ve never liked one before your wily Ravenclaw. Your Snape is just mean enough to be interesting (you\'d hardly expect him to just starting writing sonnets, right?) I love the hidden agendas and the whodonit of the last chapter. Very amusing read! And what an original concept! Also. . .the image of Snape at dinner with the soup will live with me for many years. Ah. . .to be that spoon.

Cheers!

Cyndy
person Alexis
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is aat sat story. Please write more!!!
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hate reviewing because i only review when i truly love the story and then i can\'t think of high enough praise to give to the author. you may have gathered from my first sentence that i turly love this story. i can\'t find one fault in it. you have a great gift please keep up the excellent work and please please please update love labours paradise lost soon another one of my favourite fics.