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for Just A Girl

by reenka

person Matt
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I don't understand why you didn't post this under the other story you wrote this as a prequal to. I like how you describe what goes on. I only wish that you would write more.
person Dave
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a dork! O.K he's inexperienced and she's his kid sister, so what. She needs him, it's safe, she won't tell. Surely the most nervous of guys would at least explore her budding breasts, kiss her sweet, eager lips? Get the hell out of the water, Ronald, and lay your cock on her sex ready pussy. Get her little girl tits out of her bra and enjoy yourself! Don't torture yourself or her any longer-hump her until she can feel you coming.
Nice story idea, but come on, give the guy balls and give us a series that develops their relationship in a realistic way.
person Dan
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very cool story. I would love to read the rest of it. Who would have thought that a Ron/Ginny incest story could be this fasinating and enthralling. Hope you keep going with it.
person Sky
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I liked Nerve as well -- this is a rare but interesting pairing. The only person i can see Ginny with is Ron.