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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 1-4 of your story........ I don\'t think she could have gotten any luckier than to have had Draco be the one to find her!!! Between Draco & Severus, Hermione will be in very good hands!!! As far as the OOC of these 2, I don\'t know that they really are. sidesidering their positions in spying who\'s to say that this isn\'t esactly how they would react to her ou the the sight of the rest of the school? I think it would be a lot more OOC if they were helping her out in the open.
I am really curious as to how Draco will respond to his father when he has to face him? I wouldn\'t want to face Severus or Draco if I were Lucius!!!
I do like your story & will be watching for your next update*
I am really curious as to how Draco will respond to his father when he has to face him? I wouldn\'t want to face Severus or Draco if I were Lucius!!!
I do like your story & will be watching for your next update*
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Excellent story - shows lots of promise. Can\'t wait to see where it goes.
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool start! please do continue the story!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Yes Draco and Snape are OOC but I like this OOC version of them. It will be interesting to see what happens next.....