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Good chapter. I like the Hermione/Draco relationship. I look forward to seeing where you lead them.
I don\'t know if Draco is too OOC. Other than his ferret behaviour in OoTP, his shock over his father being a Death Eater at the end, you never knew to whom his loyalties lay. I always considered him to be a free agent, out for himself. Just MHO.
Write more soon.

Chapter 7... You are really doing a wonderful job of writing the emotions for these characters!!! Hermione is hurting & needs time to recover & Draco is hurting as well!!! I also think that you are writing a very believeable Severus Snape!!! FABULOUS job on your part!!!

I am looking forward to the next visit from Draco, to see how Hermione deals with him!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<

great story!

Chapter 6... Sounds like things are going to get worse before they get better!!! I can only imagine what the plan is & if it means Hermione going into Hogsmeade, I think she will have a lot of difficulty with it!!! I am looking forward to seeing how she reacts when she finds out who her attacker was!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<

I can see where you think that Snape and Draco are OOC, but I rather like them. In fact, I love this story. You\'ve sucked me into the story and I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapters. Please update soon. I think that even though everyone is slightly OOC, it works well and what you\'ve changed is mostly subtle and it works. And frankly, I see Snape getting angry at first year essays as well. If I was I\' I\'d have that set up as a detention for hermione. I\'d give her detention once a week and have her grade the papers! ^^ Sorry, I\'m wierd, I know. Anyway. I like how you\'re progressing and I like how you didn\'t have her knowing who it was, I don\'t think she has to know yet. Plus, the girl is smart, she knew that Draco knew. She should ask him, or at least make some connections. Anyway, I love this, keep writing, and I expect to see more soon! ^^

~Dee

Well. Well, well, well, well.

Lucius needs to die. Draco is perfect *dreamy sigh*. Snape is.... *purr*. Harry needs to die. Ron needs to die. Minerva needs to die. Hermione needs to marry Draco. :-D I like how you had Severus ask Hermione to grade papers for him - that in my mind showed just how much trust he puts in her.

I really like this story. It reminds me of \"Splinters\" by diagonalist, only with Hermione instead of Harry (which is why I immediately decided to read it).

yay! thought you\'d never update. nice chap! hope you put in some more D/Hr interaction. kudos!

This is a very intriguing premise, and I very interested to know how this works out. I\'m glad that this fic would end up D/Hr, and I\'m glad to see Severus in a good light. I\'m thinking that Harry still has his Marauder\'s Map, and am worried how that would fit into the picture.

Anyhoo, I\'ll be keeping an eye out for this fic.

What a great fic. I think it is very original and I like the uneasy alliance between Draco and Snape. The new & horrific dimension the pensieve revealed just adds to the dynamics going on between D & Hr.

I look forward to reading more.