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Very good. Highly entertaining. Excellent writing and few typing errors, and for some, like me, that is important. I like your plot and the fact that I don\'t know where it is going. Its like riding a rollercoaster blindfolded.
One question though(and I would understand if you can\'t answer it): Who is Hermione going to end up with? Admittedly I\'m rooting for Snape.

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I am a sick sick woman....i love the hermione/lucius,snape triang.i c.i can\'t help it...in fanfiction....I love the bad boys....and I have been a fan of Hermione with Lucius pairings (when they involve seduction....not rape).....and a fan of Hermione and Snape.......there is even a story out there with a relationship trio of Hermione/Lucius/Severus that is awesome.....please keep up the good work on this story....i love it.

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I really like \'Taming Your Will\'! It is nicely written and I can see Lucius Malfoy doing this - you describe him just like I see (and love *grin*) him... And I like it the way he acts towards his son and Severus Snape.

I am, unfortunately, not a native speaker of English (as you can tell by the stupid mistakes I make), otherwise I would offer to spellcheck TYW for you - sometimes there are mistakes thven ven I can see *ggg*, but I don\'t think it destroys the beauty of this story, it doesn\'t bother me much - but I thought I\'d mention it...

Well done, please, continue this as soon as possible!!! I LOVE your writing style!!!

Yours

Mogli the Witch

I love this story-please continue soon. :)

Very good!! I really like this pairing, andthere aren\'t many stories out there with it, so... Keep it up!! Update!!

I remember reading this earlier and loving it...why didn\'t you conti It It truly shows promise. Lots of sexual tension, and some actual plot thrown in as well. Come on, wrinothnother chapter...you know where Draco smirks at her calls her his father whore...or Snape in anger actually shows her some Death Eater passion...I\'m waiting, what\'s next?

This is very intriguing! At first, I though this is a Draermiermione fic, (my fave ship ) but it turned out to beius/ius/Hermione. It turns me on when the Malfoys are lusting over Hermione.*naughty smile*
Write MORE.

A very promising beginning. Can\'t wait to read more of this exiting pairing.
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Ah, Lucius is such a bastard...a sexy one but a bastard nonetheless. Love the story so far. Is this going to end up a SS/HG fic or HG/LM fic? Either way, I want more. ^^