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for Taming Your Will

by ScarletEmma

person Anon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the update. Mmmm, Snape has got plans of his own huh. Bloody hell I wish I was his plan. hehe.
person Droxy
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I give you credit for taking on LM/HG, this is not an easy pairing.

Your LM is an arrogant prick, this is good. But us LM fans want to hear more about what he looks like and what he wears.

You have an ..uhm-- intersting relationship between SS and LM.
person beth
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is English your second language? I\'m not trying to be insulting or anything, just curious, because you used \"busy\" in the 4th chapter when I think mea meant \"buss.\"s.\"

I think you have a great story here. Keep up the good work.
person Paprika
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
I\'ve never been fond of this pairing, but this is great.
Keep up the great work, I\'m looking forward to your next update.
person Pallas
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter!! I\'m so much loking forward to the next chapters!! I find Harry very cute when he\'s this protective, and I wonder what exactly Lucius has in store for Hermoine, and what kind of plan Dumbledore and Snape have... please update soon!!
person hope
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like this story! Lucius as a Professor has been done before, as has Lucius lusting after Hermione,but never with
quite the twists you put to it.
This is so complex... Lucius wants her, Snape wants her.... Lucius and Snape have an...err.... past. Draco doesn\'t like what his
father is planning.... Is he jealous? And Harry is unstable. Wow. I\'m never a Harry/Hermione shipper but you even make that
a believeable possibility in this story.

I ususally sail the good ship Snape/Hermione but there are so many possible ways for this to go... I\'ll be pleased to continue
reading whichever way you take it.

And oh yeah.. Sure there are some grammar and spelling probs here and there ( a beta could fix that no prob!) But the story is
intriguing enough for me to keep reading anyway!
Good job and update soon. Please Please Please!
person Amy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHH!!! I luv the whole Snape/Lucius/Hermione thing...do I smell a threesome? I hope I do!!! lol...Keep it comming...Update soon
person anna
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For your first Lucius fic I think it is great. U definetly are keeping Lucius in character, not that OOC fics suck or anything. I love them all, whether they have Au or OOC. Please update soon, and if u can please email me at devotchka92@yahoo.com when u do. Thanks.
person Terri
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hummm, sneaky. What a dream Severus was having. I can\'t wait to see what happens when Lucius finds out that Hermione is Severus\'s type. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please post soon.
person fluorescein
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum. *creams panties* I would love it so very much if this could be a LM/HG/SS threesome couple. So very nice. It\'d be postiively erotic and oh so fun.