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for Arrested Development

by reenka

person Sachiko
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs long and hard*
Oh gods, Harry\'s sanity... Ron\'s sanity... my sanity....
Lovely work though.
I have to congratulate you on writing the most believable
H/D interaction AND sex scenes I\'ve ever read.
And I\'ve read a Lot.
Somehow all others end up sounding OOC, with either Draco or Harry suddenly, unexplainably acting... wimpy.
Everything H/D of yours I\'ve gone through so far makes me want to read more. And more.
Characters are complex, and round, and interesting.
The style is captivating.
*bows* Keep writing.
And it would make me even more warm and fuzzy if you sent a quick email
when you update/post something new.
:)
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a great last line!
person somekindofberry
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW can you finish it mid-word??????????/
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!! This has made me laugh so hard I started to cry. one ron is just perfectly ron and blunt wellwell ron. and two it sounds just like my friend and I when I\'m stuck in a guy! this is an awsome little story. hee hee hee.
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