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by LauraDoll

person Crazy4Pirates
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best i\'ve ever read. . . . . . PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
person acid_bath
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey very cool story!
i like the scenarios u put them in and the food has a lot of kintenttential!
keep up the great work!!!


^__^

and pls update soon!
person Kiristeen
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this was delightful! : )

Kiri
person Valentine
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!! GREAT Story.
person Morgana
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that there is going to be more of this story.I\'m hooked.It is very good.A++++++++++++++ Awesome :O)
person Dusty
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What? That\'s it?!

Well it was delicious as it was...even if it was faaaar too short for my liking.

Please continue? ::sad puppy face::
person Ashley
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This is so good! Hurry and add more!
person red_fanngirl
schedule December 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
wow, I'm amazed at how nicely you worked the sensuality across the story. The pauses, the interleaving of dialogue.... everything was very well done.
I really hope you continue this story. Well Done!
person Lunadeath
schedule December 22, 2002 at 12:00 AM
oooo... i really don't know what to say usually with ones that i really like. you have a really nice way of writing and i love the way you have Harry and Draco interact together. it's so believeable! More soon i hope!
person Xamphira
schedule December 21, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Oh, delicious!
I like your intelligent Draco very much; the whole reasoning behind him leaving the dark side makes beautifully neat sense.
But... you can't end it there. You just can't! I mean, great foreplay, but where's the main event? ;-)