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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person JCC
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, another great chapter! And a new character--be still Miss Granger\'s heart! Please forgive my impatience?
person Droxy
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! Night reading material.

Been missing sev and k, glad you came back here
person jeannette
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohh hermione and gabriel,good pair,....please.
person Ghaeth
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! I\'m so glad you\'ve updated. Mind you, I did think it was about time you got a wee bit of a life But of course it\'s brilliant! And I AM delighted that poor Hermione hanallnally got someone to moon over. Thank you - and blush away, girl, you deserve it!
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy happy joy joy, EPU gets an update!!!

I love how you\'re able to weave so many threads into a beautiful tapestry -- I\'ll stop before the metaphor gets knotted but suffice it to say that you have an amazing talent for storytelling (just ask my kids or your legion of fanfic fans!).

The subplot with Brinna Mangle tugs at me in a way I never expected; sweet, painful, true. I can\'t tell you how much it means to me that you have allowed your Severus to care for this spirit who has experienced more than anyone ever should. The moments you create for these two are as pure and as heart-rending as any I\'ve read (including Atticus and Scout) and it speaks to your talent that you pull these scenes off without resorting to cliche or blatant manipulation. *happy sigh*

Do carry on; it may not bt ant and Sev but it\'s damn good nonetheless....
person IrishRavenX
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bows to the great FriendlyQuark* We know of your great writing skills, and explainations have been given... but how you manage to update all 3 stories and carry on other aspects of life will always astound me. Ah, if only time-turners were real.

This chapter was wonderful (once again, \'as usual\'), the exchange between Severus and Miss Mangle was very moving. Like the other characters you bring in, she just seems so \'alive\', with dimensions that other writers can fail to make when writing a character...very nifty. :)

person deblovesdragon
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, how I have missed this fic! I realize that everyone loves the TT fic (me included), but I really think your Kathryn LeBlanc fics are your finest. There are so many layers to them. So much drama and suspense.
Tense situation, indeed. Very apt chapter name. I was so afraid for Hermione. I am glad that you let her come out of the ordeal realitively (sp) unharmed.
So, Gabriel LeBlanc, huh. Well, you wrote that Hermione couldn\'t forgive Ron, so why not. Please make a quick note at the beginning of the next chapter as to Gabriel\'s age. He\'s young, but just how young?

Oh fic idea. (Not that you really need another.) If you have Minuet and Harry survive (PLEASE!!!), perhaps you could write a light, romantic fic(let) about them getting married or when they are adults. Just an idea. Trealreally are a cute couple.

Cheers Barrie!!!
person Brian
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FASTER!!! :: Cracks wh UPD UPDATE FASTER!!! Just kidding, but it is hell waiting for you to update, you realize that right? Oh that and I have updated my story too, as well as starting another one if you care to read them-no pressure or anything. :: gives wided eyed innocent look::
person Kim
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I\'m glad you didn\'t forget about this story. I\'ve been eagerly awaiting an update. It\'s so well written.

person Brian
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!