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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person Joanna Scarlett
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh.......you are sooooo lucky! I was thisclose to callin Guido to have him come to your house, break both your legs and chain you to your computer to get you to update. :-) A little faster next time eh? not like you got a life or anything......//rolls eyes//

Lynette
person jeannette
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it is so great to read more of your story again. i was beginning to think something happen. like maybe old voldy got you and tortured you. ha ha ha. i love it, can\'t wait to read how the final battle will end up. harry potter 1- voldemort 0.
person emvee
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank god an update!!!! I was getting worried you had forgotten this story or was going after JK\'s record!!! LUVITLUVITLUVITLUVITLUVITLUVIT...keep it up. -- emvee --
person jen
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'m soo happy you were able to update! I had to go back and do some major rereading, but it\'s all good. Way worth it! :o) That ending has me a bit worried, though. You\'ve got me really wondering about what is going to happen with Harry and all that. I hope that you\'ll be able to update again soon!
person droxy
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DANCING WITH JOY!!

Oh yes, Sev and K are back again without missing a beat.

Don\'t you dare kill off Sev or K, or I will hunt you down. LOL Well, at least marry them off before you kill \'em.

Interesting cliffy with Miss Mangle.

Love the OCs ( all of them!)

person Ghaeth
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Welcome back! As always, superbly written and imagination-provoking and greed-stimulating (because of course I want more, more, more) The concept of family hexes going \'awry\' is hilarious; was grandmere anticipating that some family might not appreciate Severus\' pursuit of Kathryn? And of course any Mangle plotlines are fascinating.... Write on, sister!
person Deeble
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O frabjous day!

True, this is short, but it\'s a new chapter and it\'s full of foreshadowing -- the battle is nigh, and Kat doesn\'t know who she\'ll protect. I\'m glad you have her wondering what she\'ll do, particularly since she does care very much for Harry as a person, not just as a potential wizarding world savior. It\'s a bit like the dilemma of a mother whose husband and child are both in danger. Those are different sorts of love, and which is stronger?

I liked her interfamilial sign language. She and her brother must have been close to have worked out a fairly secret form of communication.
person JCC
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you!!
person Elaine Lahey
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At long last! This story is one of the best out there and I have been pining for it. Please continue.
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was LUNCH?! The funniest thing about that is that my mom would have a hissy-fit if I tried to cancel our lunches, just as Kat\'s mom did. That\'s probably not a good thing, is it? Of course, I might actually be a spy who can kill with impunity .... (pauses for raucous laughter to die down)

I LOVED \"Gabby,\" the angel, the dragon and the thought that Draco might be fascinated simply because there was another blond on campus.

I\'ve missed Kat and Sev ~ glad to see they\'ve decided to check in. I\'m even more glad to see that your health has been restored, your pregnant roomie has achieved (temporary) sanity and that there\'s an appropriately worshipful man in your life.

Here\'s to hoping that the EPU current of inspiration continues unimpeded.