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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person Droxy
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES! Hnd lnd looks strange at wife running through the house screaming \"Sev and Kat back together again!\".

Seriously, Kat is a very cold and calculating killer. Yes she is. Great imagery.

The longing lonesome feeling of Kat for Sev is so dead on. It is going to be interseting to hear how Sev is handling the seperation and then his elation at the news she is coming back.

I will be reading this when I go on contract to India for six months.
person Peeves
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*clears throat*... YAY!!!!

((raspberries and hugs))

Peeves
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you are back with the Sub Rosa sequel. Were you done with the Quirrel and Lupin stories?

Thanks for showing Kathryn as an assassin. It is one thing to know that she has done that, it is another to read how she goes about it. Nothing too graphic, but still scary.

Yippee! She\'s going back to England and Severus!
person Lady Aidil
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I`m so happy,you are coming back with your endlessly amazing invention and people I`ve got used to like and love.Hence I`m going to check updates as usual,ready to enjoy the continuation.Besides I hope you wanted to create some drawings as the appendix to the story,since I appreciate them as well.
person Ann
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so pleased to see that you\'re continuing this story. I\'m eagerly awaiting more.
person tamargrl
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There\'s a big grin plastered across my face.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
(Not that I didn\'t enjoy those little vignettes from others\' points of view, mind you.)
yay!
more!
person Ventrue66
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter. This is going to be hard, waiting for each chapter. When I started Sub Rosa it was more than half way finished. Oh well, patience is a vertue, right?
person kate
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEA! Kathryn gets to go back to Severus!

So glad to see my favorite author is back (o.k., so I\'m biased but I have excellent taste) with my favorite OFC! And right on schedule (\"mid-December\" having been the promise).

Your writing style is clear and so descrie the that I can visualize every scene and still get swept up in the emotions and dialogue. Can\'t wait to see what comes next.en ien if I might already know. sig sign of good writing -- it stands up to multiple readings.
person Zephyr
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sub Rosa was a am am am so looking forward toreading more of this Universe..