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Okay, what are those 3 new agents of the dark? Are they part demon or something? I am very interested to see their part in your fic.
The welcoming of the Slytherin first year was pretty enlightening. I loved how Severus had to surpress his amusement of the situation til he was gone.
I look forward to Kathryn\'s DADA classes to commence.
Ryan is adorable. (And what else would he be.)
Keep writing please!!!!

I just love it. Waiting for the next chapter.

Poor Sev, whether heknows it or not, the baby is going to ruin his reputation.

Excellent story! I love the baby so much! Glad to see Ron get put in his place also, I always did think he was a narrow minded prat!

Great Chapter!!! Finally some accord between Snape and Harry! i hope Harry is alright. You are a great writer. I am really enjoying this story!!

Another g cha chapter, the imagery of the growth in Potter and Granger and the comparison is very well done. The working in of \"Potter is not his parents\" is seamless.

Severus doesn\'t seem happy about the bindings. Interesting.

There are several points where your stories make me cry. The exchange between Harry and Severus -- where Harry says he\'s sorry for whatever Severus had to go through to get Ryan not to mentino the \"he\'s himself\" parry -- makes me well up each and every time I read it (and that\'s saying something, you know).

I was delighted to find Kathryn back in action with our beloved Severus. Your writing is wonderful and yuor imagery is priceless - I laughed so hard the the \"pastel fairy\" picture because I think you\'ve met my mother! Keep it up and thanks again.

She sure told Ron off, didn\'t she. Well that will show him. I love it when Kathryn is fiercely (sp) protective of Severus. Ryan will be alright though. And Ron will get over it too, right?

Great chapter, humor \" looked like he\'d eat the baby\" and angst.

I love Kate`s attitude as the Ryan`s baby-sitter,I see the Severus`both tension and relief when he realized she`s been able to handle his baby appearence so well,however for the reader (me,of course!) it was obvious she would manage because of her love to him,the nobility of soul and character and the kind of family she was brought up,but he had feared so much,I suppose,that the baby`s origin could be the obst bet between them.I enjoy the Arthur`s role as the adviser in very new subject of Severus` life-the fatherhood.I think that the Severus` will to make Weasleys the foster parents for Ryan is equisite as well.The scene with Ron is priceless!You have real sense of drama,the ability to write so interesting and your style!Simply delightful!I`m still issedssed that here,on the amateurs` site,for non-sale writers-I have the highest pleasure to meet such an astonishingly talented author with great sense of well-done work,rich vocabulary,amazing imagination and expressive style-I suck in every chapter like only the hungry vampire could do;)The entire world around me is vanishing,because my mind is engrossed in fantastic reality of your story.I`ve so loved it,since both fics of you ease the hard hours of my duties,the reading is my painkiller and hobby,thank you for all!