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i almost thought that draco was doing that to fauna on his own,instead of being under a spell.that was great,can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Three chapters in one evening,I`m almost exhausted yet happy and excited as well-lovely angst,the sort of writing I appreciate so much,it was splendid-all these new characters of your own.I didn`t want to experience such a horrific thing that Draco had-very tramatic for him,I think.He`ll need Severus` support,I think this is the sort of things they are very familira for DE-the pure violation against someone`s will,including the violator`s one as well and Severus had many such experiences,so,I hope,knows the ways to deal with aftermath.It was wonderfully good-Severus as Kate`s savior.The most interesting problems for me,just minutes after reading-first-Minuet and Harry-have they any chance for the happy recognition and life or the darkness would eat both of them,another one,I think,more important question-Kate`s bounds made by Dumbledore,taming her killer`s instincts-is it really good for her and Order or rather too far coming disturbance that could cost her life in the future?I don`t think she`s unable to keep control herself in these cases,this is very interesting plot,the one that has moved me now.Sorry for my chaotic mail,maybe more uneven than usual,but I was 24 hours in job during Christmas and,of course have my family,anger and anxious because of my absence,so my mind is spinning in head,\"jingling bells\" are everywhere,but it didn`t stop me from the main pleasure of the evening-the reading of the favourite fics-with the one of you on the top.I`m curious if David(very nasty personBTW)would make any more appearances and what role would play,I want to see the confrontation between Kate and him once more with his very unpleasant end,I don`t really like the kind of traitor he`s been.

I hope you answer some questions in the next chapter... like what was controlling Draco? Was it David? I hope Fauna is over her crush now. I sure would be. :-)
Write more soon Friendlyquark.

OOOOHHHHH this is SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER.

Your first 10 paragraphs or so are such damn good imagery.


I\'ve been ina serious mood for angsty and dark and Iam so happy withthis chapter.

See a Disney movie- BAH. I want more angst and dark.

I knew somethign wasn\'t good with Fauna, poor girl. My goodness, poor Severus, the poor man is tortured enough, but this is the stuff of angst and makes the sweet so much sweeter.

Somehow I see teh killer that is K is going to come out, yet only Severus will be able to understand.

Still maintaining that adult persective between Sev and K. Harry is getting more into aspects beyond his years. Very vweery angsty and verry gry good.

By minimizing the comfort you do up the angst.

Oh poor Mt. t. Harry thinks she\'s a \"good kid\"? Throw her a bone already! :-)

Oh, that was a very cure chapter with Harry and Min.

So Fauna might also be something else. Interesting.

Thanks for posting so soon and Happlidalidays

all i have to say barrie is...zachariah Abercrombie???? sad sad sad...jk.

okay what did you bring into the story this time? the anti-elders or something? when you described the girl i thought of the child the vampire Armand created just after he became a vamp. Did you bring vamps into the story Barrie?

I hope Ron snaps out of it soon. He really just doesn\'t get the sacrifices that Severus and Kathryn have to make Wow Wow, the story of Elise was sad. Poor vain thing.

Please keep writing. Happy Christmas!

Darn you and your foriegn language passwords! I\'m not even sure what language that was for Kate\'s passwthouthough I assume it was Latin. anyway i really like this so far, as much as Sub Rosa. Keep up the good work friend.