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I do hope that Fauna will be better.
Severus\'s realisation about Harry really was needed, another finally!


Len

I think I may cry in pure happiness...*nuzzles Quarky kitten-style* There\'s MORE!!!

I\'m too sleepy to be eloquent, so let\'s leave it that I\'m very, very, VERY pleased with your imagination & continuing character development. One smaling ing I wonder...is Luna going to make another appearance? From the way you described her in Sub Rosa, I\'ve wondered if you think she\'s entirely human. She\'s such an odd character to begin with, but you made her sound...almost...part Elder? Not a prediction so much as a statement that you could pull it off if you wanted to. And Ginny\'s future is looking more interesting by the minute...and Back-Biter has yet to reappear...and GO HARRY FOR BEING A GENTLEMAN!!! Oof...the first guy who kissed me went at it like some weird suction/tongue machine. Romantic in some situations, but a very off-putting first kiss. Very wet *shudders.* \'Course, I also realized at that moment that I couldn\'t be attracted to the guy. Oops. Minuet, you are a lucky, lucky girl (even if that wasn\'t her first kiss). You (Quark, not Minuet) have turned the super-angsty, screaming Harry of OOTP into...into...a Man. I guess Min was also partly responsible, though...

I love Ryan. The brats at school had better accept him, or may Kathryn turn them into bouncing ferrets (apologies to Draco, who is no longer ferret-materiel -- I love you, too). I love them all. Except the swine who betrayed Kathryn (don\'t remember his name). He can drop with that lovely curse she pulled up in Sub Rosa. Pity it only works when the caster is dying. Can you change that? Can Firenze stomp on his bollucks or something?

Can\'t wait for your next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work! -- TQ

Harry & Min are very sweet. How about a little more friction and fireworks with Kathryn?

Yeah! Lemony goodness! Three times, huh? Way to go Severus. I guess the torture paid off.
Warding off Death with the elvish song was lovely. It was a beautiful scene.
Cheers!

I am so glad that you are still going with this.
Keep writing and I\'ll will keep reading and enjoying.
dave

i will try to be patient,but the stories are really good.every time you update,it\'s like a delicous new candy.i\'m glad that fauna will be better,maybe she won\'t be so possessive.

Loved it - she \"does innocent about as well as Severus\" - priceless. More, please.

*sighs and sips lemoncontcontentedly* Thank you!

Goody, I finally have time to review. The story is moving along wonderfully. I\'m so happy that Harry and Min got together. It will be fun to see how Draco reacts, maybe him and Harry will become good friends someday. At least they get along better now. Can\'t wait to see what happens with Ron. If Min and her sister spent part of the summer with Sev, I think you should write about it, maybe add it to Min\'s side story. I just think it would be fun see how Severus faired all alone with two little girls to take care of. Come to think of it, I wonder what Sev will think about Harry and Min. He has grown a fatherly affection for the girl. I know he tolerates Harry more now, and even respects him, but I can see him being a little protective when it come to Min. Can\'t wait for more. Sorry it takes me so long to review. A lot of times I only have a few minutes to sneek onto puteputer to read the latest chapter.

I was so eager to review before that I pushed enter efore I had actually written it...
The elves bit reminded me that I