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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person jeannette
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this so cool,i could just picture snape jioning his family in the bath.
person Len
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I shouldn\'t have read this right now...
The laughter made my heads really hurt.
How you described the boys coming down the stairs was priceless. I doubt anyone can repeat that...
It was another lovely chapter as always.

Len
person Ghaeth
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm - \'Meet the Parents\' Severus style. I like it; this explains a great deal about our beloved Severus\' temperment.
person TQ
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAH! Three thousaheerheers for Winky! (& Severus & Kathryn, of course ^_~)

Wow, but you update quickly...2 new chapters so quickly? How the heck do you do it? It\'s definitely nice to have the continuity.

I ended up reading OOTP again yesterday (looovely thing, winter holiday), & was struck again by how much more I like your 16 & 17-year-old-Harry than the 15-year-old. It\'s a niceft, ft, avoiding the constant screaming. It works, though...it\'s totally plausible that Dumbledore\'s showing his hand, along with a little maturing, might re-stabilize him. I\'m not sure that Rowling intends to salvage Draco, but SCREW IT, I like your Draco better. He\'s just so flatly mean in the books...no real character at all. Hmph. Your Draco FEELS. He also deserves a lot of hugs. And a new set of parents. And a new childhood *snuggles Baby Draco*. -- TQ
person jeannette
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love kathyrines temper. she is so cool.draco is still going to marry kathyrines neice?
love the story,see you next year.
person Lady Aidil
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful gift for the last day in this year!A sweet-acid taste of lemons will the reminder of the day when the New Year comes soon.I wish both you and me many meetings exactly here,on the virtual pages of the masterpiece of fics that brings me the genuine joy of reading every day I find out your new installment.The scene in infirmary,Kate saving the poor dying girl-marvellous as well as the rest of the chapter,including very funny short conversation between Minerva and Kate(my,my,Minerva as the foster grandma for Ryan,very delightful,indeed),especially the words of great Kate`s \"sacrifice\",for students`sake,of course!despite the little fact she would die without her \"tormentor\" and acts of \"misery\",such a martyr person our Kate is,isn`t she?LOL
Happy New Year for you and all beloved characters of the story as well!Lady Aidil,with love and devotion as usual.
person Len
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!

I\'ll have to reread it inthe morning when I\'m sober...

Have a good and fun new year!


Len
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am going to start the \"plea\" campaign for you to NOT break Harry\'s poor little heart. Some one else will have to come up with a name and an acronym. (ANYBODY!!!) I having trouble with that. If I get enough people to join, will you not break Harry\'s heart. Besides Severus and Kathryn, he is the coolest character in your fic.

SAVE HARRY\'S HEART!
person Ghaeth
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I remain in awe of how you advance the plot and still give such palpable details. The fact that Severus wonders when he began to \'give a damn\' about Potter\'s happiness certainly reflects his earlier musings in the face of ancient . Yo. Your plot twists always leave me wondering and you always follow with delicious prose. And you update so regularly! Thank you!
person jeannette
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
for a chapter with no sex in it,it was good.i just couldn\'t imagine malfoy dancing with an eleven year old.