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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person droxy
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well its off to India now for me.

I hope I can log on to this site over there.

Anyhow, this last chapter is creepy. How do you fight something that relicates madness and self doubt?

I loved the funeral and the prayer.

person JC
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter--o what glee--love it, love it love it
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapter of Miss Mangle gave me chills. I can\'t help but to continually admire Severus\'s self-composure and restraint. He is one of the strongest (if not THE strongest) assets to the light.
Keep writing, I ALWAYS find it interesting.

PS Anymore updates on your Ian/Tonks fic soon?
person kate
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of myoritorite chapters of all those you\'ve written -- beautifully mixed angst, compassion, love and regret. Maybe it\'s just the times we live in but diffdifficult realization that even demons and monsters might hurt, love and respond to a soft word seems painfully important.
person Droxy
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This miss mangle thing isn\'t good. It isn\'t good at all.
person Ghaeth
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad there was a little bit of light there! And of all the characters you could kill off, Pince was certainly the least loveable. Interesting how Harry\'s sense of smell seems to be developing - are you going further with that? As always, your prose sings of genius....
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter. It was getting so gloomy in your Potter world. A sweet, romantic chapter is just what the doctor ordered. Thank you Barrie!
(Perhaps more Harry and Minue you you so desire.)
person Droxy
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s getting darker...I may need a flashlight. ;>

Great details with the students and their behavior.
person jeannette
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad.but i guess she did what she had to do,to gid oid of the evil.

sorry about your kitty,i\'m glad you have others to keep you company.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that your sequel is even darker than Sub Rosa. Wow!
I feel sorry for Pince. Poor weak woman. She didn\'t stand a chance. I hope Dumbledore hires a replacement with the heart of a lion!
Harry is just so intuitive that it is creeping me out. In a good way.
Cheers!