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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person Ghaeth
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Delicious, as usual. I\'m curious, are you going to have a moment of epiphany for poor Fauna so she can get on with her life? We know that Severus and Kathryn can ride any storm but I do feel badly for the students sucked into the whirlwind that don\'t have the fortitude of Harry and Minuet.... Just a thought. I\'m a softie.
person JC
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a most enjoyable story. And, thanks to Kate for facilitating.
person Helen
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit confused at first as to what is going on but then it all made sense.
I had a very awful evening tonight but the ending of this chapter made me smile.
You write very well, don\'t stop and keep making people smile!


Helen
person (He)len
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was different...
It\'s good to read when the writing changes and isn\'t always the same.
Although it\'s really sad how things are getting darker.
*sigh*


Helen(I read from somewhere that shortening your name takes power over yourself away from you... I read too much)
person RaquelGreenleaf
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know my comment might be a bit late (seeing as you\'ve already are on a second part to your story) but,ead ead your first part, ficlettes and second part (the part your on now) all in three days. (well more or less.) I started reading it once, but had to stop to go some were, and couldn\'t find it for about two to three weeks . And then I found it about thrays ays ago (odviouslly) and could not stop reading it. (stayed up till 6:15 in the morning reading it once. my normal time is 3:30, not past 6. But it\'s o.k.) There were a few things I wanted to ask you, but I can\'t remember them right now. (I ask when i CAN remember. Kay?) But for now I\'ll say this at less. I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Here\'s one thing I wanted to ask, about Harry and Minuet, is it a serious or is it just a small fling? Because I would HATE IT if Harry got his hope up, and then, find out that she doesn\'t really care about him, the way he cares about her.

post again soon
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t hear it, but I am laughing. Min, the little manipulator!!! Fake tears to get Draco to snap out of it. Fantastic. Clever little wench! (Or would that be the author??) I look forward to more.
person Len
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was good to catch up...
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EWW scary! The dark voices of doubt in Kathryn\'s head. Luckily she was smart and strong enough to push them away. Most would not be. They really need to come up with a plan of defense against those 3 demons. Or everything could be lost.
I still don\'t trust the girl with Ron. Or Ron\'s behaviour. I think you have something planned with that.
person Ghaeth
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"prose far from sterling and closer to purple\" - well, luckily for us, yours is much more sterling than purple! Thanks again for the frequent updates - I really do look forward to the stolen moments during the day when I can catch up on EPU. And I love the way you give very subtle hints about where the plot might be heading... May you (and your writing) live forever!
person JC
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One question-after the funeral, the redhead who is speaking to Ron Weasley is this the same redhead Ron was speaking to when Snape was making the housing arrangements for Allegra and Tina?