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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRGG!! The dark ones know about Harry and Minuet. Through Ron!!! AAARRRGGG!!!
This is not good. Not good at all. (Be afraid, be VERY afraid.)
person Helen
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Ron is acting stranger by the moment...
Scary.
And finally some H/M goodyness!
It would be so nice for Min to have her mother at the castle. although I fear for what the other Houses might think of her...


Helen
person Ventrue66
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t had tim rea read EPU lately, so tonight I got to read like five chapters all in a row. It was great!!! I LOVE the new task that you\'ve given Severus. I\'ve always thought he had a higher calling. Of course this is a great burden on him, but it makes the story so much more interesting. What about Miss Mangle? Is seems like we\'re leaning toward redeption there. Is it even possible for an ancidemodemon to be redeamed? I guess we\'ll find out, eh.

P.S. Did you forget to send your art to my other e-mail address?
person Droxy
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice mix of sweet and dark in this chapter.

Yes, Uncle Sev is very protective of Min. LOL
person Kateri
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, Ron knows and while he seems fine with it.... Very curious as to what is going on with him, or should I say who is doing what WITH him. Great chapter
person Ghaeth
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shivers up the spine yet again ... i just want to curl up at your feet and worship that writing ability of yours. More! More!
person Ghaeth
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Great plot twist .... the Snape legacy brought to bear... and as always, your prose sings and chuckles its way into the heart - that \'thing with the eyebrow\' indeed! And thank you for giving Fauna a gift.
person JCC
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Lady Freddy most definitely adds mystery.

Oh, so many worries for Snape; and on top of that, he still has things to learn about his descendants.

This story is so good. It is hard to wait each day for the next chapter but soooo worth it! Thanks.
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus... just what he needs, more responsibility. Fighting the dark ones. So that means he has to fight Miss Mangle too. Urg!

You misunderstood my last review. I didn\'t necessarily mean Harry and Minuet. It could be Ginny and Neville or Hermione and (who is Hermione with again??) Just thought that some of the poor kids might like to feel alive. Loved. Just an idea. Disgard at your leisure.
person Helen
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was rather unexpected and a real surprise.
I\'m very intrigued...
And naturally always dutifully waiting for more.
*grin*


Helen