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for E Pluribus Unum

by Barrie

person Ghaeth
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is rare that a fanfic gets me all misty eyed....
person Helen
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the bit about Orion\'s(I like that name more than Ryan for some reason...) harem...
He\'ll have a hard time when he\'s a teenager and all those older women come to pinch his cheeck telling him how he has grown and how cute he still is...
And I could use a miniature like that. It would make a nice decoration somewhere very public.... Bah.. I think I\'m getting dizzy again.


Helen
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
See, I always knew Hermione was a groovy beat chick at heart. Loved hers and Harry\'s gifts to Severus. Pistols rule!! Of course, I was personally more a Clash girl. Loved the reggae beats.

Kathryn and Severus are getting married! (Someday) So did he give her a cake topper in lieu of an engagement ring?

More please FQ!
person Brian
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU USED KEROUAC!!!!! Does this mean that you read some of his work? Cause if i remember correctly, you hadn\'t read any of it when i asked you about it. That plus another Sex Pistols reference? KEEP IT UP!!!
person Brian
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! With chapters like this i can actually be patient for Harry and Min. Keep it up, and tell Kate thank you for being such a wonderful beta for ya.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Sob, sniffle)at wat was just the sweetest thing I have ever read. (snort) Their \"families\" gave their consent for them to be betrothed. (sniff) Oh and the photographs of their youthful selves was beautiful also.
I swear FQ, if you kill them off, I will never speakpe) pe) to you again. It would be a tragedy of the highest magnitude. (sniffle, snort)
Okay, I am composed now. It was so touching. I love it when you have chapters like this one to brighten the darkness of the story. Can\'t have a rainbow without the rain... (cheesy, huh)
Cheers!
person tamargrl
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to do this, but uhhhhhhhhhhhh! More!!!!!!! Dammit, that was incredibly nasty of you. Tease! You\'re nothing but a big ole tease! I\'m mad at you. Leaving it like that after getting my hopes up. Yes the lockets were touching and it was terribly sweet, but dammit, I want more!
Ok, I\'m done. You know I only say things like that becaus\'s \'s so good and I practically race to the computer every day to see what the new chapter brings. :) Love your work!
person Glenda
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter nearly made me cry. That was such a sweet scene! Please continue to update frequently - I adore your work and wish I could come up with plots the way you do! If you ever need another beta, though, I\'m excellent at that!

Glenda
person Droxy
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The pureblood intendeds ritual was really sweet.

I loved that everyone got AD outragous socks.
person JCC
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So the mystery of Ron continues. Can\'t wait.