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Way to go Neville!!!
I mean, I expected great things from Severus, but Neville? (Severus dispatching Madam Gideon was well done too.)
Now Ryan is a little more safe than he was before.
Great!!

Good chapter with a bit of action. Hmm so what is Ms. Mangle? A demon looking for redemtion?


I like your Malfoy description. I like my Malfoys evil and hot and I think you got both.

You can tel Sev likes his job in the chapter, and he\'s even copped a bit \'tude.

\"Of course, a near death outing and danger would get his homicidal lover in the mood.\"

I\'m still laughing. :)

I thought I reviewed earlier, but the review isn\'t there...hmmm....

I\'m hoping that the \'who will die\' question is easily resolved...all the Death Eaters just explode, leaving tiny pieces of Death Eater all over the street. But things rarely work out like that. Severus and Kathryn on their first op together. :) That is kinda sweet, in the \'one-of-them-may-very-well-die\' sort of way. More story please? :)

No THAT is how cliffhangers should be done. BAM!
I know that you will write more tomorrow, so I will refrain from begging. Okay, just a little... Please write more tomorrow. You can\'t leave us hanging like this!!!!!
Cheers!

OOOh an evil cliff hanger.

Loved teh dialog between Sev and K here.

Yes, Kate teh beta is a Slytherin, but possibly more Ravenclaw. If she was Slytherin, she\'d be trying to get money for this LOL. Cheerleaders are Hufflepuffs.

I am going to India again- leavingday.day.

This just seems like a very er.. unique form of foreplay...
>.<
Great place for ending the chapter! /sarcasm

But a wonderful chapter as always nonetheless(I have no idea about my gar oar on that one)
Well isn\'t this world a crazy place.


Helen(Must. make. neighbour. stop. playing that damn song already!!!)

Finally some sense into Ron. Of course I didn\'t get any questions answered, just got more of those...
But at least the matter has been brought to light.
Just one thing though, didn\'t Katie Bell graduate already?


Helen

HEY!!! I know I can out-wrestle anyone but are you offering my job to others?? LOL

We knew Min was smart but good on Neville for being the first to state the brilliant (\"We need to get Professor Leblanc\"). It\'s so refreshing to see others (Terry Boot and Neville, for example) being used to flesh out a story. So often an author\'s focus winds up being so restricted to just a few main characters that they forget there are other characters who can do more than just provide comic relief. I know I\'ve been guilty of that.

I must say that I like the way you have Slytherin and Gryfindor combining their strengths, leading to a true (forgive me this overused word) synergy. The only downside is that Dumbledore is probably buzzing with self-congratulatory pride, claiming that this is a result of his years of scheduling the two Houses into double potions classes!

Well, damn. Apparently I need a beta for my reviews. Allow me to correct (ahem): \"(forgive me FOR this overused word)\"


Perhaps you SHOULD BE offering my job to others.



Naaaaah! ;*