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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh FQ, I LOVED it when Severus flicked his wrist and the knife appeared in his hand. It brought back memories of a adolescent crush on a boy who could flip his butterfly knife open and closed. It was the combination of grace and danger that got to me. Severus in this chapter just reminded me of that. (hubba, hubba)
Really worried about Severus in the next chapter. Miss Mangle knows and I am afraid of what she will do with that information.
Keep writing dear. We all appreciate it.
Really worried about Severus in the next chapter. Miss Mangle knows and I am afraid of what she will do with that information.
Keep writing dear. We all appreciate it.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kathryn doesn\'t have to find out what life is like without Severus...I also hope the plot line will be bringing him safely back to Hogwarts, again.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your sense of humor ... and the fact that you manage to put funny words into every character\'s mouth at some point and make them sound -- well -- IN character. (
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter was great, snape was wonderful
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so cool. Neville going comatose as he realizes that Snape is human .. Loved it!!!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Every day the quest for the next chapter; and as always, it is soooo good! Thanks so much for a great adventure!
Kudos to you! I look forward to the day when your original bound material makes the \"New York Times Best Sellers\" list.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Kudos to you! I look forward to the day when your original bound material makes the \"New York Times Best Sellers\" list.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs uncontrollably*
Even characters laughing in a computer screen in writing can have contageous laughter.
I think this light moment was needed with all the foreboding darkness looming ahead.
And I liked Minuet\'s POV.
Even characters laughing in a computer screen in writing can have contageous laughter.
I think this light moment was needed with all the foreboding darkness looming ahead.
And I liked Minuet\'s POV.
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argh! It\'s a lucky thing you DO write fast, because that\'s a horrible, horrible cliffhanger. I mean, it\'s GOOD, but the fact that it ends there is bad. Oh, you know what I mean. Anyway, the idea of Snape with knives up his sleeves is very cool.
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very glad that Kat and Sev managed to get out of that battle without blowing their covers or leaving the kids unprotected. Getting one of the Evil Ones out of the way doesn\'t hurt, either. I like the continuing character information on Miss Mangle, from the knife\'s disinterest in her to Snape\'s ability to feel the bond there, though I have to wonder what will happen to her in the end. I doubt she could simply turn into a real girl, Pinocchio-like.
Hooray for frequent updates!
Hooray for frequent updates!
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fight scene, you do write them so well. Kudos on tying up both Neville\'s and Orion/Severus\'s problems and getting Neville to do it. Lovely, simply lovely. I do hope you\'ll find it in your heart to actually write the next scene instead of alluding to it. Come on, throw us a lemon, puhleeze! You do it oh, so well.
*flutters eyelashes furiously*
:)
*flutters eyelashes furiously*
:)