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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person jkrazed
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cough, cough. Err... give me a minute. I forgot who to talk...
person star
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
COLD SHOWER ALERT! THAT WAS HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes a very hot chapter. I think I shorted out my keyboard with my drooling. I just have one comment to make about Severus. Can I have one?
person caliko
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! LOL YES!! It\'s a work of art! ^_^ Hehehehehhe.... I just LOVE Sev talking dirty! ***Looking around for hubby... ah HA! Found him... hehehehe...he\'s gonna be HAPPY tonight!**** Excuse me.. i have to work off some.. um.. tension...
Caliko
person Rilla
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Mmmm...nice smut. (And yes, this review is short because you\'ve left me completely incoherent.)
person Iphignia
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work, here! And I must commend the Humphries reference in the previous chapter! I adore the way you have written these guys. You have a valuable gift. I don\'t review very often, but this is very well done and you should know that (though I know I\'m not the first to say it). I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Good job writing a number of fics. I only ever completed one and then never motivated myself again. The scene with the two of them in bed, discussing pain, was incredibly strong and moving. I hope you\'re aware of it.
Isn\'t reading fun? It always seems like I\'m taking in new experie whe when I read the work of the talented writers who post to the internet. What a fabulous new genre.
I know I sound high, but I swear I\'m not.
regards, Iphy
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot! Please don\'t finish this story too soon. It is one of my favorites.
I am still waiting for him to take her home with him to Hogwarts. His desk is waiting for them. (grins) I also can\'t wait til Harry and Ron find out. That will be good.
Do your Hermione and Severus realize that they are moving toward permanent couplehood?

Cheers!
person Hawklaw
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was some of the most incredibly *hot* smut I have ever read! I have enjoyed this story since the beginning -- and I\'m hoping for more!
person elementaldeity
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Severus is a touch insecure. I love the eyes of winter and i did enjoy this one immensly. One question, you mentioned in one chapter about Lucius\' cravings, will ther any any more mention of him? Also, you used the term \'channel\' alittle much. Try variations of it instead. Thanks for writing.
person T
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!! Please excuse my typing but my computer screen is all Foggy!!!!! HOLY CRAP!!! talk about a hot chapter! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!! **kisses feet** this was great! Please continue.