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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person star
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOO KEEP GOING I\'M STILL LOVING IT!!!!!!
person jkrazed
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I beleive that this must be an important chapter. I wonder how many times he\'s taken women somewhere more \'private.\' Hummmm.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. What a wonderful twist to have it be the Malfoy home they had been in all that time, very funny. I can\'t wait to read about their day/days at Evermore.
person rubberduck
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh, oh. you\'re stock just skyrocketed. led zepellin is the best. hehe. i\'m going to have to disect that song now. anyway, that was a good chapter. i\'m thinking they\'re falling in love. scary proposition. especially when you consider it\'s with snape! well, at least harry made an attempt to check in with hermione. hopefully it will be the start of a reconciliation. can\'t wait for more. on another business matter, have you gotthe the two emails i sent you about your other story?
person Sherrafina
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmm..... Sevvie wants some babies!!! This is going GREAT!!!!!!!! MORE MORE!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10.... I am very much hoping that this is a lead in to a proposal perhaps!!! If they are both feeling that there is MORE to this than the FABULOUS SEX, then maybe they will both come to the realization that they want to be together always (with yet more FABULOUS SEX)!!! Looking forward to chapter 11, D^..^^..^<
person rubberduck
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so hot my glasses fogged up. good job.
person spaz141
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 - Is what I like to reto ato as lemon art. Thanks.
person liquidscissors
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do know what they say about idol hands, don\'t you?\"

The correct word is \'idle\', not idol.

Otherwise, a smokin\' chapter!
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know that I am going to have to turn down the thermostat after that! Phew!!! hehe