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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person Spearsister
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad I decieded to look this story up again reading it ages ago then got distracted but I do love the concept and the story line. great job!!!
person Lana Manckir
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading this fic! The sex moments are great, I just think you\'re overdong the smoking, but overall a good story.
person missyspikehead
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you cant stop it there! no no no! i want to see hermione tell snape she loves him and then thye have to get married! don\'t you know the rules??? lol keep writing! its really good!
person azulkan2
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Really liked this last chapter. Some house, his anstrial home. Can\'t wait for more.
person shaz
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon, this is the best story and i will die if i cant read anymore soon so please dont be responsible for my death:D please
hugs shaz
person rubberduck
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not fair. not fair at all. i don\'t like this new set up of subcategories. it made me miss your new chapter. i didn\'t realize that the stories in the subcategories weren\'t part of the main listing. no wonder i haven\'t seen some of the stories i like to read lately. very bummed about that indeed. in this case, for this site, change is bad. lol. anyway, i\'m sure you want to hear what i think of your chapter. well, what can i say but another great read. i like how things are progressing. keep it up. you know, i haven\'t \'heard\' from you in awhile. what\'s up with that?
person Shiro Ryu
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aiyahh, this was just what the doctor ordered! Absolutely magnificent! I am definitely going to have to read your other fics. You really are quite a good writer! Such a nice blend of humor, sex, and (the beginninf) rf) romance. I am so looking forward to any updates you do on this fic. I would never have thought of Snape (although the actor who portrays him is something of a hottie,great voice) and Hermione in a hash bar, just too good for words! Please don\'t stop!
person jkrazed
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick \"Loved it\" before I run off. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... What a WONDERFUL chapter!!! I really like how you are having them get to know each other!!! I do hope that one of them grows a set & tells the other of their heart\'s feelings!!!
Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
person caliko
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... mood definatly shifted that chapter.. changed the w fla flavor of the story... **nods** Ok, Champ.. let\'s see what you have planned.^
C^
Caliko