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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person TheGreyLady
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh... my... god... I love this. And when I say love, I mean \"DAMN!\" Hermie and Sev getting stoned together. I had considered doing something of this nature but now, having read yours, I can\'t bring myself to write something that will inevitably be poorer (I guess I\'ll just have to stick with booze and Disneyland *sob*). Bravo! This is an excellent piece and I don\'t think you could have done it better (though I\'m wondering how they managed to smoke so much... a joint a pop and the hooka to boot... I think I would have been dead!). LOL! Hermie with cotton mouth and Snape with bloodshot eyes. It almost makes me want to smoke pot again. Again, amazing job!

Still Ill,
TheGreyLady
person Dark Derby
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was very relaxing and I would have nalmsalms about this being one of those epic fanfics. :D
Hmm... Whose playing Jackie? If it\'s Hermione have it be Krum.
person GeekGoddess
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a very good chapter......a fic on the 70s show....that so lik like a cute fic.....Fez? Seamus or Neville
person star
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really do love your story! I feel like I need a \"hooter\" now! hehee
person Dark Derby
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I read this yesterday, didn\'t review then, but felt compelled to tell you that thinking of it helped me relax after a final I knew I\'d bottomed out on today. I also have to say I will never tease boys if it is anything like what the frustration I experienced at the end of chapter two, j/k.
person Kristy
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh I love it!. the whole \"you\'re going to be with a man\" part was kind of cheesy but.......mmmmmm, cies.ies.(j/k)....wait, back on track. Probably something they\'d say in that condition, although I bet they\'d both be stuck somewhere between a giggle fit and arousal after he said it. Hooka\'s are way sexier than joints, depending on the hooka. Please keep updating, I\'m interested on where this d god go.
person WendyNat
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a fun fic! Great idea - I am 99.9% positive that THIS hasn\'t been done before! Kudos :)
person jkrazed
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:

Ok, I deserve that. Left you hanging enough, it\'s time I get the payback..aint it a bitch. Love the chapter, itching for number 3.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapters 1 & 2, really looking forward to chapter 3!!! I don\'t think I\'ve ever seen a story like this one at all, nice & original!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Ash Storm
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this story, Its funny....but why is Snape in amsterdam????
keep on writing
Luv
Ash