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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person chelle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so far this is great.
person Estrilda
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh - yes - please keep going. They both need to be held to their promise to tell . . . us!
person t
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD!!! This chapter made me wish I was Hermione.
person GeekGoddess
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As a HUGE Snape/Hermione fan.....off course I want you to go on....maybe tell us what happens when the canabus haze fades....will they still want each other....maybe a happy ending.....much to the shock of ROn and Harry.
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I have to ask......this isn\'t the end, is it? Please......there has to be more!! You did an absolutely fantastic job on it!!
person rubberduck
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. pretty steamy. and i\'m not talking aboue sme smoke from the joint. the sex is off the scale and now you throw in a bit of mystery. why is hermione so inhibited? what happened from her past to make her so closed? can\'t wait to see how snape gets her to cut loose, even though he\'s started already. need to see more.
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome! (Truly awesome, not the overused version of the word.)
Man, now I am all worked up! I loved how she needed to be coaxed into orgasm. That fantasy talk was excellent.
I feel a little guilty that I am hearing Alan Rickman growling your words. (Ah, the divine sound of it...) Well, not TOO guilty.
Please write more soon. I hope the next chapter doesn\'t take you 7 hours.
Cheers!
person star
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keep going holy crap that was great!
person Dark Derby
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t think of anything I would be less opposed to than this story continuing.
I loved this, the only criticism I have would be the moans and noises, like \"mmm...\", they\'re a little distracting most of the time.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5........ DAMN that was some WONDERFULLY written smut!!! I am hoping that in a future chapter her desk fantasy will be made into reality!!! Looking forward to more!!! Deb >^..^<