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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!
person jkrazed
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that you\'ll make a full length out of this one? It\'s FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep em coming!!!
person Estrilda
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes - you are definitely the master (mistress) of the written word. She is sposeposed and he is so profound - it\'s amazing.
person Rilla
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been a lazy reviewer with this story, but I wanted to let you know that I am reading and enjoying it!
person rubberduck
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter. it was so emotional and touching. i\'m glad you decided to continue this. even though i\'m not a huge fan of ss/hg pairings this is very nicely done. i\'m interested to see if you delve into their past a little bit. from what you wrote in this chapter, i would like to know more. i can\'t wait for the next update.
person spaz141
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic. Don\'t let it end soon, please!!!
person Heather
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa girl! Thanks for that 7 hours! Good Lord.

Hash as a catalyst for loss of inhibitions...brilliant. I could keep going, but I must take a cold shower...

Kee goi going, please!

Heather
person chelle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Er,,yes. Where are those damn boyfriends when you need them? Wow. That was hot!
person LadyTess
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Shaolin,

I really love your story. I personally think a small amount of any mood altering substance can be a liberating thing. I like the way you let your characters play a little bit with the hash and letting their inhibitions down. Wonderful smut by the way. I hope you continue the story. I\'d love to find out what Lucius Malfoy likes to do. Maybe he\'ll do it with Hermione and Severus! We can only hope. Keep up the wonderful storytelling.

Tess