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for The Wizards Breath

by shaolin

person Titania
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On My God! I need more! Please! Now, while you are busy writing, I am going to light up and call my boyfriend.

Titania
Author of Fucking with Snape and Walls
person ehu
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yummy smut and tastefully done too! all the descriptions made even ME pant, and thats hard to do.
i hope that you continue to update, now that i\'m going to be reading your story until its done! so far
i haven\'t seen anything really grammatically incorrect (i wasn\'t looking for it anyways, to absorbed in...
other fanciful meanderings). great story! happy writing!
person Kiristeen
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lolol , oh I\'m definitely still enjoying this one. Lololol

loved the Ron comment. The situation was just bad enough to \'suck dick\' it sucked malfoy dick. LOLOLOLOL I have *so* got to remember that line. : )~


Kiri
person casi
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. It\'s really just hot. I would love to see more interaction between hermione and harry and ron.. nothing sexual but when they are together and fighting its wonderful.
person Imp
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. Its an interesting premise for a fic.
person jkrazed
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just when I was beginning to think that you weren\'t going to update anymore, you surprise me with an update! A good on at that! Can\'t wait for the next!
person rubberduck
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hermione with attitude. this chapter was funny, especially ron trying to help by explaining and harry\'s look of horror. i hope you\'re not going to break up the threesome. it just seems kind of wrong to do. i am kind of shocked by the two boys ditching hermione. that\'s the one aspect of the story i don\'t like. but hey, hopefully things will work out in the end. can\'t wait for more.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God I can\'t believe you just left it there. I\'m sure Severus will have no problem letting her stay with him. I can\'t wait for your next chapter. Pleupdaupdate soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7....... I am still liking this a lot!!! I think it served Harry & Ron right to be shut out by Hermione, they always do it to her!!! I guess they are the type that live by the rule Do As I Say, Not As I Do!!! I am looking forward to the next chapter & more of Hermione & Severus!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person Caliko
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this fic brings back some warm memories... lol.. anywho, I love it! ^_^ can\'t wait till the next chapter!