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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very very nice. i really like how you portray severus. he\'s still snarky and very wicked but he\'s likable in that sexy slytherin way of his. what about silk scarves? how you use them is up to well him i suppose lol
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! I think it\'s funny, I wondered if drugs would ever come to the world of hogwarts. I hope you will continue this for a w!!!!!!!! I really am enjoying it, just one question, what about introducing a bong. j/k I really do like your story and you can tell the others, who send flames, it\'s their choice to read it or not if they don\'t like it, don\'t read anymore! There is NO need to be an asshole. PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, first things first: really like this story, have to admit wasn\'t exactly enthused with the hash bar scenario but what can I say? you\'ve won me over. Can\'t wait until the next chappie! Update soon.
now I don\'t normally read other people\'s reviews of stories but your comments at the top of your last chapter made me go and take a look and now I have a bee in my bonnet which I need to lay to rest.
I\'d like to take issue with the comments left by PeggyBundy about this story and about the HG/SS ship in general. First let me say that I believe in constructive criticism and the right of individuals to comments on elements of a story that they find unacceptable, for example racism etc. If Peggy was merely trying to convey that she would be within her rights. However she chose to resort to childish namecalling and incoherent offensive remarks.
If she is appalled with a student / teacher relationship she is perfectly entitled to that opinion. I hn ton to find the idea a bit squicky too - but I recognise that this is only my opinion and am perfectly happy with other people writing and reading stories in that scenario - I choose not to but I don\'t seek to impose that choice on other people and as can be seen here would fight against anyone who tried to impose it on others.
The legal age of consent in the UK is 16 but obviously teacher-student relationships are forbidden and in real-life I would frown and report one if I knew about it and this is the crucial distinction in REAL LIFE. The works here are all fiction, based on fictional characters and thus can be used to explore territory that is forbidden in reality. In fact, this story 't e't even about that which makes her review even more irrelevent. Clearly Peggy has not bothered to read past the summary to find out that Hermione is out of school, of legal age and that Snape is no longer her teacher. So if these are her issues she\'s picked the wrong story to target.
Finally, this is an adult site. It deals with adult themes and subjects. Most stories have descriptive summaries that contain the pairing so if you find something particularly distasteful just don\'t click on the link, it\'s very simple. I was surprised that Rilla and jkrazed were on a list of authors that Peggy objected to. I\'ve read fics by both and they don\'t strike me as sick, or bordering on paedophilia. Actually, scratch that, I\'m surprised that she made a list. This is hardly worthy of j\'accuse type behaviour.
The internet is a big place, unfortunately Peggy doesn\'t seem to think that it can hold creativity that doesn\'t hold the same beliefs that she does. That is a shame.
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I\'d like to take issue with the comments left by PeggyBundy about this story and about the HG/SS ship in general. First let me say that I believe in constructive criticism and the right of individuals to comments on elements of a story that they find unacceptable, for example racism etc. If Peggy was merely trying to convey that she would be within her rights. However she chose to resort to childish namecalling and incoherent offensive remarks.
If she is appalled with a student / teacher relationship she is perfectly entitled to that opinion. I hn ton to find the idea a bit squicky too - but I recognise that this is only my opinion and am perfectly happy with other people writing and reading stories in that scenario - I choose not to but I don\'t seek to impose that choice on other people and as can be seen here would fight against anyone who tried to impose it on others.
The legal age of consent in the UK is 16 but obviously teacher-student relationships are forbidden and in real-life I would frown and report one if I knew about it and this is the crucial distinction in REAL LIFE. The works here are all fiction, based on fictional characters and thus can be used to explore territory that is forbidden in reality. In fact, this story 't e't even about that which makes her review even more irrelevent. Clearly Peggy has not bothered to read past the summary to find out that Hermione is out of school, of legal age and that Snape is no longer her teacher. So if these are her issues she\'s picked the wrong story to target.
Finally,
The internet is a big place, unfortunately Peggy doesn\'t seem to think that it can hold creativity that doesn\'t hold the same beliefs that she does. That is a shame.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit!! Just read some of the other reviews and I cannot believe people actually think the SS/HG pairing is so evil!! Lets face it - in the stories I\'ve read, HG is no little girl but a consenting adult! There\'s no paedophilia in this story or any of the others I choose to read. Equally, I find it sickening that some psycho wrote about Emma Watson / Alan Rickman in that way- that\'s just downright offensive to a young actress and a fantastic actor as well as generally disgusting. Keep this story going - it\'s harmless escapism and brings pleasure to ordinary hardworking people like me who wouldn\'t hurt the hair on anybody\'s head.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!! PLEASE keep it coming:)
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve reread your story as it is a couple of times now. You really know how to write smut. I\'m jealous of that ability, do you give lessons? jk
Seriously though, this is a great story. The pairing is one that a lot of people love, and certainly makes people think what if about any handsome teacher they ever had (and we all know that everyone had a crush on a teacher at one point) and what it would be like to meet them later in life.
Don\'t worry about the people who don\'t like the pairing. If they were the majority then there wouldn\'t be so many reviews telling you how sexy this story is. I cannot wait for your next update. The story is really hot and you leave us hanging and wanting more everytime.
Cheers!
Seriously though, this is a great story. The pairing is one that a lot of people love, and certainly makes people think what if about any handsome teacher they ever had (and we all know that everyone had a crush on a teacher at one point) and what it would be like to meet them later in life.
Don\'t worry about the people who don\'t like the pairing. If they were the majority then there wouldn\'t be so many reviews telling you how sexy this story is. I cannot wait for your next update. The story is really hot and you leave us hanging and wanting more everytime.
Cheers!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody hilarious and attention capturing. I was weary when I read the summary, but the first chapter was amazing. Who knew? And I love this pairing, of course. Can\'t wait to read more.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much fun. (Of course, I suppose you can\'t really take my word on it, since I was first on Peggy\'s list of horribly depraved, disgusting authors and all. hehe) Looking forward to that smut you write so well!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wheee!!! i love your story! it\'s totally awesome. love how you added are you being served in the. ma. makes me smile. keep up the good work! (damn, I sound like a teacher.... bleh... -__-\'