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Chapter 9...Honesty Is the Best Policy

This is AWESOME & TOTALY HOT!!! To hear the admissions to each other just added to the heat between them!!! My cheeks are still warm & the words just aren\'t coming to me;-) Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^<

I love the story. I like how you write Severus, your Sev seems very well adjusted and wickedly fun! Your Hermione is also written well. I love the upcoming plot development, a week, alot of pot, alot of Severus. You can skip the Ron and Harry sub-plot, unless they get on the wrong side of Snape and he gets to curse them properly. It would be fun to \"hear\" Sev and Herm gossip about the naughty secrets of the other staff members and have Sev tell her one of Lucius nty ety escapades (to tie back to \"she was a light-weight.\") I\'ll leave how Sev uses it to his advantage, up to you!

very well written, although the general story line really doesn\'t appeal to me, you have definatly drawn me into the story with your well written characters. i really enjoyed it, which came as a suprise to me. but there you have it. Great job and keep up the good work.

I must say that is one of the most incredable stories i have ever read....I cannot wait till the next chapter is up somtimes i forgot that this was only a fanfiction i would but it if it ever was a book

love the story! you made me re-schedule my holiday plans! *grin*
what i\'d really love to see is severus\' dark side. always loved that one. just borderline dangerous and all that. i\'d love that! really would!

I\'m so glad you\'ve updated I\'ve been looking forward to it. I really love this story and i can\'t believe people are giving you a hard time. sometimes people suck. I have to say I love your writing style everything I write is to serious so I really enjoy this type of story so go write more hee hee

I know I already reviewed this chapter but I would like to leave a few words of support, people like peggy bundy are intimadated by people with the guts to put their work out there so they resort to childish behav I\' I\'m so sorry sombody on this site would behave like that. All the writers here are very clear with the don\'t like don\'t read rule and people should do just that. Most of us love your work and can\'t wait for you to update so don\'t let the smallminded get to you.

mmmmm...something special. Maybe .... Well mmmvvvvmmmm..... I\'ll just leave that to your imagination.

Wonderful Chapter. Ignore those arseholes who flame!

FLAMERS SUCK! iF YOU DO NOT HAVE ANYTHING NICE TO SAY.T OUT OUT!

Keep up the good work. \"I\" enjoy your fic.

LOL

SB

This is super, especially the beginning is very good. We never see Severus so relaxed in canon, and I doubt he would be, but your Severus definitely has his charm and I like him a lot =P You have some misspellings now and then that are a bit jarring, but those can be corrected.

Your story is great keep the chapters coming.