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I have enjoyed reading this fanfic very much. It is good to see both Severus and Hermione enjoying all their time together. Please keep up the good writing.

Take all the whining as a compliment--they can't wait to see what happens next. Regarding the spellcheck--you could download a fake Microsoft Word from openoffice.org, or use Google Documents (click on the "more" menu on the upper left hand corner of the Google start page and select Documents). I'm not sure how well you can edit with Google Documents offline, since I haven't tried that part out. Google Documents is still in beta testing, but all the main functions are already in gmail, so spellcheck etc. should work just fine. If you have a desktop with a lousy internet connection, you might need to get someone else to download the Open Office for you and you can transfer it via CD, DVD, or local network. I would think a laptop at the local cafe should be sufficient for downloading purposes, but that's just a guess.

The "sweet" thing brings a wistful smile to my face. I dated an older guy for a while (same as Severus--had a decent enough love life at some point, but is in an eternal dry spell now), and he was always commenting on how sweet I was. I like the cretin/Draco Head Boy exchange, and how relaxed and playful Hermione and Snape are when they converse with each other. And it's good to see her splurge on 15 grams. :-)

I think she's being a touch harsh with Ron and Harry, seeing as she never laid down the law with them before, although she's correct to chew them out about abandoning her. Ron trying to score with Hermione is quite amusing.

I love this story. It's my hope that you didn't leave it to die on the vine as it were. Excellent writing, unique plot, and unbeatable sex scenes make me want to come back for more. Keep up the good work and please, please, please update when you can!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Please Update!!!!!

I\'m sorry, I just simply HAVE to point this out, as its one of my biggest pet peeves.

Its could HAVE, would HAVE, should HAVE

not could of, would of, should of, etc.

Other than that, I love this!

great work!
Breathtaking!

I`m really craving for more!

I hope you will give them a happy end! (I know, I`m an old romantic but what shall I do....)

Confronting Harry and Ron would also be a nice touch. In order for a happy end they have to make their relationship open (just my opinion)


Keep writing I`ll keep waiting...


Sandra

P.S.: Sorry for any mistakes. English is not my naturall

Glad to see this is continuing! I can\'t wait for the update - but if the walls are being ripped away from around you - do us a favour and try and get to safety - for many reasons - you can\'t write if you are dead, you can\'t do anything if you are dead, and it\'s just not worth dying for (that hurt to say that cause I love this story!)

hmmm... pretty good... Lots of passion... I like it. It is first class smut! LOL... I am curious to see where you will be taking it! Waiting anxiously for more!