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I LIKE IT KEEP IT UP

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! DRACO!! DON\'T GO THERE!! DON\'T!!! \'MIONE!! TELL HIM THE TRUTH!!! HE NEEDS TO HEAR IT!! LUCIS!!! Behave... Behave... Wait- what\'s with Pansy? I like the plot so far - and the discriptions are... are... heaven. I throw myself at your feet, begging for another chapter.

I am fully enjoying this story, although the grammar and such is a little disjointed. Nothing a beta couldn\'t take care of. If you need one, I\'d be more than willing to help.

I can\'t wait to see where the story is going and I hope you update soon!

Omg! Such a good story! I love it. I hope you continue soon. ^_^ Poor Draco. I hope he finds out who Hermione really is, and doesn\'t get angry with her for what happened with his father. Excellent job so far!

Ooooooops! I\'m thinking (hoping) that Draco misinterpreted that little scene. I\'m on the edge of my seat waiting to find out.


Kiri

that was a lovely story...please continue

It\'s called a beta. Get one. You need it desperately. Your concept is interesting, but I got tired of pretending to understand what you were trying to say! Proofread please - your readers shouldn\'t be scratching their heads trying to read!

Interesting story you have here. It\'s good, but I only have one complaint: It seems as if the story is moving a little bit too fast. When I say this I mean that the character development is not exactly occurring and the scenery of each chapter is jumping from one place to another too quickly. That\'s a little bit confusing and it kind of leaves out some detail that otherwise would have been there. Other than that, everything is fine. I didn\'t see any errors, maybe my eye wasn\'t catching them, but if there were, just go back and run a grammar and spellcheck over your chapters. You\'re doing a good job, so keep writing.

Ciao ^_^

like the story, but you need to update faster, that was an evil cliffy you left. ~mock pouting~

This is different & am curious as to where it will go? Will be watching for chapter 8, Deb >^..^<