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by Joga

person Paprika
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is a nasty cliff if i ever saw one!!!
Hurry up and update!!!
Great story
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16..... I know that what Hermione said was more hurtful than she intended, but she was very upset & hurt by the thins he had said & done to her!!! I am really hoping that you will be adding chapter 17 soon so we can find out what has happened to Hermione!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person Brian
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn cliffie... but good story. Hurry up with the next chapter.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15..... I can\'t say that I blame Hermione for not wanting or feeling like she should be the one to start an informal conversation with Draco!!! I would think after what has happened he would be the one to try to make ammends!!! Hope that their flight home will see Draco making some effort!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
person SADIE
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EVIL. EVIL. EVIL WOMAN HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!! PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON DONT DO THIS TO ME.
person RikuNghts
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow you update fast! That\'s great! And I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! ^_^
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12-14....... Things seem to be getting better for the 2 of them & am anxious to see what happens on this trip!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 8-11....... I am so glad that you updated this story!!! If Draco only knew half of what he thinks he knows he would be begging Hermione to forgive him!!! I hope that slap will jog his brain enough to see past his thoughts & seek out the truth!!! Hoping for more soon, Deb >^..^<
person Mel
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OUCH. Poor Draco... And \'Mione, you do have to admit, the evidence *IS* all on his side... Damn girl, can\'t she any anything right???
person RikuNghts
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for more! Man, Draco shouldn\'t jump to conclusions like that! I feel bad for both of them. Hope everything gets better. ^_^