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by Joga

person Katie
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a really interesting story. although I have to ask, Do you read books of Judith McNaught? anyway, that was a good ending. I'll be keeping an eye on your works. ;)
person Blanche DuBois
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ven fon following this wonderful fic of yours at FFnet and I wanna know if this one on AFF is a naughtier version.
Meaning more explicit sex scenes?
person RikuNghts
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Loved the ending! Such a good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I will now have to go find the other you you spoke of. Keep up the great work! ^_^
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting in the last chapter-- But the very ending was kind of funny! I probably would have been just as shocked. Good job!

Ciao^_^
person Kel
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute/funny ending! I\'ve really enjoyed reading your story, it\'s well written and I loved Lucius! Maybe we could read more about him and the others in a sequel??? Hint, hint! :) Anyway, great job and I\'ll be following up on your new story. Kudos!

-Kel
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18...... That was a FABULOUS ending & I have very much enjoyed this story!!! I will be reading your new story soon!!! Take Care, Deb >^..^<
person Mel
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*happy scream* YAAAAAAAY for the happy ending!! I loved it!! I really really loved it!!
person Mel
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HERMIONE!!!!!!!!!!!! RUN DRACO RUN!!! DON\'T LET HER BE HURT!! PLE- wait. If she\'s hurt.... Yes, let her be hurt and spill the whole damn story to Draco and then they can live happily ever after. *giggle* Happy ending!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17...... HOLY CRAP, I wasn\'t expecting that!!! What will happen know that she has revieled her secret to him?!? I know that he loved her before & has loved her as her new self, but will that combined love for her make things okay between them? Can\'t wait to see what happens between them next!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no no no please dont sya she is dead