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for Baby Sister

by GertrudeFlint

person alex
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea, it was squicky, but you did warn about that...I can appreciate the work anyway. It definitely takes some skill to write a child's perspective on this kind of thing and I think you did a great job.

As for people who are majorly offended...no one forced them to read it, so they should just heed the warnings next time, eh?
person tara
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has become the topic of much controversy and as an author who has stories posted here on AFF as well, I felt the need to see if what everyone was saying is true. Sadly, it is, and because of AFF's decision to allow this filth to remain online, I will be removing my own stories from this archive. You know, guilt by association and all that.

As the mother of a six and half year old little girl, I just have to tell you how sick you really are. If something like this happened to you in your own childhood, I am truly sorry that you had to endure something so horrifying, perhaps you should seek out some professional help. If not, and this just happens to be something that you thought would make good entertainment or is in some way your own twisted fantasy, then again, I suggest professional help.

How truly sad for you that you felt the need to seek attention in such a repugnant way.
person Horney Hermione
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic but what is wrong with you? Have you seen the number of hits? Please write more of Bill and little Ginny. You have a talent and fan base, don't waste or disappoint.
person Disgusted
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU DISGUST ME!!! I HOPE YOU ROT IN HELL FOR THE DISGUSTING THINGS YOU WROTE!!!!!!!!!!!!
person n
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person strawBerryhErsheys
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!....this was very good. it was cute. verrrry creative.
person Dave A
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delightful! Totally believable. More of Bill and Ginnie please. |When Bill leaves who looks after Baby Sister?
person Stella
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was an amazing peice of writing. I thought you really captured Ginny\'s young innocence. \"The tip of his tongue traces the gap left by a missing tooth...\"
Keep writing! :)
person dfg
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Dave
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. Totally believable. This left me wanting so much more and the possibilities and permutations just go on. But first, do you have more of Bill and Ginnie?