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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I meant to do this when you 1st posted your author\'s note, I\'m thinking better late than never!!!

It seems that you have your hands quite full right now & I wish you well with your anatomy course!!! I will be looking forward to your next update, when you have the time!!! GOOD LUCK, Deb >^..^<
person droxy
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will wait patiently for your updates to make these two the sweet romance they once were...

good luck with your classes, school comes first!

This is one of my fave marrriage law fics mostly because it deals with the domestic parts of life and the developing relationship.

Still waiting for SS\' inner death eater to take it out on Malfoy, and the guilt SS must feel for not being able to protect her.

Whatever you do, you can\'t let Malfoy get away with this....and don\'t doubt your readership either.

One of my other fave stories only manages to update once a month.



person Anon
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has most definitely been worth the wait, I hope you don\'t get to stressed with all your work!
person Sally
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know how much I\'ve been enjoying this story. Your characterizations are wonderful. I\'m sorry that there won\'t be a new chapter for awhile, but I understand how crazy \"real life\" can get. Take care of yourself and I\'ll be looking forward to the next installment.
person buttercup
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Take your time G. You\'re worth the wait. Good luck in your classes. Anatomy is a killer.
person Aussie Mel
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I absolutely love this fic! You are a fantastic writter and i can\'t wait to see more from you on tis story. I love how you developed the relationship between Hermione and Severus, it was well done and beleiveable. I also like how you made sev have a softer side. hope to see more really soon
Cya Aussie Mel
person midnight tiger
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow hun, you did a bang-up job on this chapter. the scene in the tub was wonderfully done and you have me crying...again. you seem to have a knack for that. i must say that this is one of the best \'post rape\' sceens i have ever read. thanks so much for posting, i really cant wait for more!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34... WOW is about the best word that I can find to express how I feel after reading this!!! I had to wait a bit to review because this made me cry, good tears!!! This has got to be one of the most sensative chapters I have ever read!!! BRAVO to you!!! I am very much looking forward to seeing what will happen in the next chapter!!! Til chapter 35, Deb >^..^<
person Bambu
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus\' washing in tin the tub was one of the most gentle and sensitive things I\'ve read. You beautifully expressed his support and love for her, and her own struggle with allowing him to do so, because sheo neo needed it. It was nice that you didn\'t force the circumstance nor did you rush it. A truly lovely job.
person Demosthenes
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing, simply amazing. you have moved me to tears (yes i am a big pansy). very realistic descriptions of post-rape emotions. and this story just makes me love severus even more. cant wait for the next installment!

-a boohoo-ing fan named Demos