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some of the best writers claim only when the character controls what you write can you know you wrote correcty what they would do. well done.

Oh goody goody! An updatd whd what a nice sweet update it is.

Thanks!

Wonder where she\'s going to put the wedding pictures?? =>

What a wonderful day. Twp of my favorites updated; this and Tyger Tyger.
I am absolutely astounded how well you are handling a very difficult
subject.

LOve Jeanette

Hi, I\'m reading to chapter six so far. I like the different take on the story...I think you handled the charachters well so far. Also, a question; I noticed the blot type honoring of Ron by the sharing and pouring of a libation, and then you mentioned drinking too much Wassail at a Yule party(I\'ve done that a few times myself, with Wassail or some really kick-ass mead some friends of mine can make). Are you, by chance, Asatru?

Back to reading the story now. :-)

Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severus in these 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione\'s conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<

Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severus in these 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione\'s conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Sorry his his shows up more than once, I keep getting error messages or cannot find server notices:( Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<

Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severusthesthese 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione\'s conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Sorry if this shows up more than once, I keep getting error messages or cannot find server notices:( Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<

::hugs you tightly:: Oh goodness hun, you pulled these two chapters off wonderfully! and you have me crying again... very realistically done and emotionally strong. i think you did the right thing having Hermione go to the leaving feast and her reactions there were bang on. Her mother\'s revelation was wonderful as well. sad, but wonderfully writen and i cant wait to see where this takes the story. thanks so much for posting, we\'ve missed you!

Would you believe I\'ve been haunting the boards waiting for AFF to come back on line just so I could read this.... I am so glad to see the update and so VERY impressed with how you handled this chapter. As always your writing is beautiful and seemless.

Love Jeanette

For a minute there I thought the rapist was going to be Hermione\'s father. The mother didn\'t press assault charges because? or is that not important? Very unpleasant turn to this story, but well written. Thanks for the update.