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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe Looks good! I\'m looking forward to more though.....Can you do something about how your story appears? It is very hard to read with sentances
being partial and
having to go down to the next to to finish. See what I mean?
Is a pain. Not your fault I am sure but I was hoping you could fix it? Thanks! Looking for updates!
being partial and
having to go down to the next to to finish. See what I mean?
Is a pain. Not your fault I am sure but I was hoping you could fix it? Thanks! Looking for updates!
schedule
December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting approach - you\'re going to have to come up with some fairly rea reasons for why this is better than the George or Charlie option, but I\'m sure you can do it. I look forward to more!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You just can\'t help but LOVE Albus!!! I can\'t wait to see how Severus responds to all of this!!! Hermione doesn\'t seem too thrilled, but Draco..... I don\'t think so!!! Hoping for more soon!!! Til Chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yummy...this fic looks like the beginning of something big! Update soon... and make it good dear... *grin*
~l.a.~
~l.a.~
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading quite a few of the Marriage Law stories & am amazed that , for using the same information, each one has been different from the next. Your\'s is no exception & I really do like the begining!!! I look forward to seeing where you take it!!! Til Chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Sad about Ron, but nice to see his brothers make an effort to be there for Hermione, nice touch!!!
P.S., Sad about Ron, but nice to see his brothers make an effort to be there for Hermione, nice touch!!!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning to the challenge! Am looking forward to your updates - you have a very nice writing style and this chapterveryvery well paced.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. I can\'t wait for you to update again soon. Keep up the great work!
Tiff
Tiff
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best starts to this challenge that I have seen so far. I\'m looking forward to reading more.