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WOW! I really enjoyed that chapter! That didn\'t seem so bad considering! I especially loved the vows they took! Did you make those up? They were really wonderful! I love weddings! Wonder what\'s to happen next! Update soon!

errrrgg! Love the story. frustrated with the cliffy. LOLOL

It\'s simply amazing the number of unique directions to take for this challenge. I really like yours and can\'t wait to find out what, exactly, that last bit of the mage cge ceremony was -- I imagine that was what Albus and Severus were discussing. : )~


Kiri

Twas was the best idea for a wizarding wedding ceremony that I have ever seen in fanfic! Loved it, loved this chapter! Please update soon....

Argh! Too short! Argh!! Sorry....Your story is so very interesting that i am truly eager for more and the waiting is getting to me. Please? More? Soon?

I like this take on the challenge. Reasonable characters, sensible plot development, nice bit of outrage from Hermione. I am looking forward to more soon.

The ceremony sounds like it was BEAUTIFUL!!! I am so curious as to what was in the letter, can\'t wait to find out!!!
Deb >^..^<

Well, you\'re off to a good start. I\'ve read so many responses to this challenge, but I really like the angle you\'ve taken. I like how you\'ve decided to portray Severus, much more mature than in others I\'ve read. Oh, and you\'ve gotta love Albus! Always the meddler! Do update soon!
Tanya~

Thats interesting....I am really enjoying this topic for stories.......yours was an enjoyable read......please update soon.

Chapter 3.... I just LOVE how they think of this in such a simplistic (for lack of a better word) way!!! Neither one of them are really looking at it from the emotional aspect unless they are both forgetting how babies are made;-) Sorry, but I can\'t see either one of these passionate people jumping in bed, doing the job like they are robots & then walking away without another thought about it!!! They are both very strong, pri peo people, but they aren\'t dead;-) Just the way they were talking about everything makes me really look forward to seeing how you play this asspect out!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<

I know that many authors put comments in the main area of the story, but I find that distracting so I will break with tradition. I\'m pleased to hear from you, and I\'ve been toying this story around in my head for a couple weeks now, so if I miss something glaring feel free to yell at me. It\'s all in my head (like backstory and rules) but I might forget that you aren\'t in my head. A hint about the direction I plan on taking this story... Never forget that these are both strong, independent and intellegent people. About me: I am a Hermione in many ways. If my writing, (particularly when I get to love scenes) seems familiar, I used to write on the Auelboard. I am currently unbeta\'d. Tell me if you find my writing needs it, but I am pretty independent. This is my first published HP fic. I have other G rated ones that I just haven\'t published yet.
Da Feather