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Beautifully done. : ) Nice way to weave it all together.


Kiri

Hello again, sorry I dropped off the face of the planet for a couple days. That\'s the curse of procrastination and university papers. To comment on my approach for this new chapter and the next couple I would like to give mention to Corazon (Hermione\'s Revenge) who gave me the initial bug for unsureness on the part of both SS and HG. I feel very strongly that both these characters would have their own insecurities about a physical relationship and will be taking a conservative approach. Never Fear! We will get to good stuff eventually. As unusual a situation as it is, I\'m trying to keep everyone reasonably in character without being JK myself. I would also like to tip my hat to Diana Gabaldon\'s CrossStich (aka Outlander). If you have ever read the book, I\'m thinking about the initial part of Jamie and Claire\'s marriage. I don\'t want to just toss these two in bed, so sit back and enjoy getting to know the backstory I\'ve come up with for them. And fear not, the good stuff is comming. It has a deadline afterall. Thanks ever so much to everyone who has reviewed thus far. I love the feedback. (BTW I fixed the red/read problem... silly irregular verbs!)

As Always,
Da Feather

Chapter 6........ I am really enjoying the tender side that Severus is showing towards Hermione*

THis is great...more soon please

Oh my! what a twist! LOL Those sneaky cruds. : )~

Can\'t wait to see more of this story.


Kiri

Something tells me that the kiss the Ministry official had them do at the close of the ceremony has a major part to play in what Severus and Hermione have to talk about in private... maybe it was another type of binding that they were *obviously* not aware of? Who knows? I won\'t unless you update, so please do so soon!
Tanya~

Haha, I hadn\'t realized you\'d put chapter 5 up when I reviewed last... Anywho! I love Lucius, just the way to get the ball rolling for our lovely pair, Severus and Hermione! Loved the \"you see, when a man and a woman...\" line Sev Severus... though I can\'t see him saying that, it was quite amusing anyway! Update soon!
Tanya~

I am finding this to be an interesting story. There are a lot of answers to this challenge out there right now and they vary wildly in quality. Yours is better than most so far. I am genuinely intrigued by the characterizations and glad to see that Hermione isn\'t in hysterics. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Friendlyquark

Chapter 5........ Damn that Lucius Malfoy!!! He is just one of those characters that you LOVE TO HATE!!! Though in this case his butting in put Hermione & Severus in a position that they have to take action, like they won\'t enjoy it;-) Can\'t wait to see how their getting to know each other goes!!! Deb >^..^<

HO BOY!!! That does complicate things quite a bit! I am glad that they are trying to make the most of a bad forced situation! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Update again soon!