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Love the story. It is one of the best from the WiKKt Marriagw stw stories. Keep up the great work.

This is such a refreshing perspective on the Marriage Law stories. The pacing is great, the characters are believable, and the Lucius angle is just delicious! Great storytelling! I\'m really looking forward to reading more. Update soon!

~buttercup

I\'m cryigaingain. That was just beautiful. Thanks.

The past three chapters have been really difficult to write. I hope that I\'m not dancing too far out of character, at least not without development. If you notice them flopping back and forth like a fish out of water, well... that\'s kinda what I figured two fish out of their comfortable waters would do. I\'ve tried as best I can to put myself into the situation. Anyone with questions about Severus\' experience... I really don\'t think that Death Eaters are kinky. I don\'t think they have group orgies with muggleborns before they kill them. I suppose it is a possibility, but I can\'t see old Tom being into that... Lucius perhaps...

I\'m glad that some people are enjoying this story.\'s \'s shifted from an essay procrastination tool, to a holiday project. I get so excited when I come online and there are reviews waiting for me... It\'s a great feeling. I hope everyone out there is having a great holiday season, no matter which holiday you are celebrating.

DaFeather

Chapter 9......... This was WONDERFUL!!! I really do like how you are having him open up to her!!! They wanted to get to know each other & I think they are making fabulous progress!!! The 1st kiss was so very touching!!! For these 2 I think that the reading together was almost as romantic as the 1st kiss!!! I like how you ended this, leaves it open enough to go a couple of different ways!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens during the night & the next morning!!! Deb >^..^<

A very yummy chapter. : )

I think this story, and particulalry the last couple of chapters, are very well-observed. You can believe in the transation they are making from strangers to acquiantances to friends.

I am enjoying this immensely.

Oh. My. I loooooooooooove this story, get up the ninth chapter soon! I am now addicted to your story, i like your descriptions. this is a rockin\' story.

Great chapter! I loved the little ceremony thing and I love that she let Severus join her in it! I am soo glad that she is letting it go and can move on now! It is so ironic how guys can handleod, od, gore, and guts, yet when it comes to periods and blood they get so uncomfortable! LoL... I hope you update soon!
Tanya~

That was a good chapter! I thought it was really funny how Hermione told Lucius it was a cramps potion she was after! LOL! It\'s so true that men get uncomfortable about women\'s periods and cramps! It\'s a sure fire way to make them leave the room or drop a subject! Hehe! On a more y noy note I also loved the part where Snape and Hermione had a drink of butterbeer and poured it out for Ron and those lost in the war. That was so beautiful! I think that this story is moving at just the right pace. I\'m glad that you aren\'t rushing the love part. I look forward to your next update!