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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have just read chapters 10 and 11 and thought that this was one of the more realistic portrayals of the first night and the day after, and both of them behaved sensibly and kept talking about things despite their difficulties. Very well written and very enjoyable.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most realistic stories on this plot I have seen. I enjoyed it, and look forward to reading the rest of the story. The reactions of both Hermione and Severus are believable. Keep up with your writing.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter! deep sigh I just love romantic smut! Can\'t wait to read more! Will we see Lucius pitch a hissy in the next chapter?
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the more realistic first times I\'ve read. I not sure why, but I\'m a little teary. Thanks.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awe, this chapter was so good! It really showed each of their insecurities, but not overly so! I am looking forward to your next update!
Tanya~
Tanya~
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m REALLY enjoying this story. I think your Snape is fantastic (and I hesitate to calle Snape anyone\'s but mine!). Please keep writing!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter nine was just beautiful. I had tears in my eyes when he was trying to explain his inexperience with someone he cares about to Hermione.
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! That was wonderful! So sweet and romantic! Gosh that was a great chapter! I may read it again just because it held so much yummy romance! I\'m a sucker for a good romance! I love smut don\'t get me wrong and I hope they get to it eventually, but that last chapter is my favorite so far!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! Isn\'t that sweet?
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sevvie......ai like your story very much. I often hold back things I\'d like to say for fear of sounding campy and silly. That is why so often my reviews are so short and often dry. Oh make no mistake.....you and other authors inspire me and feed my imagination. I just rarely find a way to tell you without sounding like a total goof ball. Later.