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Beautifully done! I follow this story with rapt anticipation! If you get around to it, could you email me when you update? If not, I\'ll sy hay have to check back often! Wonderful job! ~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~

Yikes!! Things are starting to come to a head. (and I want to strangle Malfoy -- both of them lol) Have to laugh -- just a little -- at Snape, though. He\'s learning very quickly that if you want a Gryffindor to comply, you can\'t hide the truth from them. Can\'t wait to see more of this.


Kiri

Excellent story, beautifully written. This is one of the best takes I have seen on the Marriage Law challenge so far. The plot is wonderful and the characterizations are spot on. I love Severus in this fic, he is just soo perfectly portrayed. Thanks for writing and keep up the good work.

Wow, you really are taking this story in your own direction. Its just so different, I finding myself caught use use you\'re not doing the expected. Thanks so much for writing.

Love the fic! I can\'t wait to see where this is going. Keep the updates coming!

I see what you mean about the bathrooms ~snicker~! I just love this story. The emotions in the story are so genuine. The characters reactions are not what I expected, but they make so much sense. I\'m dying to see what Lucius has up his sleeve.

Happy New Year!

Poor Hermione! I can\'t begin to imagine how the poor thing must feel. Being forced to marry someone that up until then had treated her cruelly and was an all around jerk! Then she has to marry the guy and he turns out to be kind and special when you get to know him! I think the Ministry forcing them to have sex so early is just abominable! Of coarse she\'s upset. She\'s separated from her family. She is afraid to tell her parents about her life so she lies to them. She\'s confused about Snape. I just hope that she will eventually be able to find some happiness!

Great writing as usual! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

I have just finished reading this story in its entirety (so far) and am thoroughly impressed. It is well thought out and explores many parameteres that manywho have anwsered this challenge have over looked. This story is intelligent and insightful and I look forward to the continuation.

Much repsect,

~Shem

Hello again! I\'m pleased to tell everyone that the horrible cold I caught has escaped. Unfortunately it is running rampant through my house. You can\'t have everything I suppose. The past couple chapters I have tried for authenticity and I hope I achieved it. To me, unmittigated pleasure your first time just doesn\'t ring right... no matter who you are ;) I\'m so pleased and amused to note that your observations hit the nail on the head more often than n Be Be sure to watch how things are said since I like subtlety. I hope I\'m planting things well for future chapters, but I\'m sure you\'ll let me know. Thanks for the reviews, I love to get them.
Da Feather

*sniff, sniff* that was beautiful, sad yet beautiful. Thank you for writing.