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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all 16 chapters and I loved the story!!! Love that both of them are so tenative and the Hermione is so straight forward in her emotional discussions with Severus. Keep the chapters coming. Excellent work!
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was so sweet. I can\'t wait til their Christmas holiday together. Write more soon please.
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16..... I really like the way you wrote this chapter!!! I think the way you had them get closer over time made it very believeable, innocent & honest!!! I think this was the only way to open the doors to a more phyl rel relationship between them!!! WELL DONE!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! I love this story! It\'s so sweet the way they are growing into each other. Waiting for Lucius and Draco to make their move.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic so far. It\'s well written and has a nicely developing relationship between Hermione and Severus. I like the fact that she\'s not super orgasmic right from the get-go and that he\'s not Casanova either. Their unfolding romance is actually quite sweet.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a neat twist, thanks.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderfully gentle chapter of the two of them getting closer, and learning comfort with each other. : ) I enjoyed it.
Kiri
Kiri
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter and this is going great keep up the great work.........update soon
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I like this one the bes of all the forced marriage fics; it has a lovely light touch and a subtle shifting from indifference, to friendship, to something more - probably. That last chapter was quite touching, without being sentimental. More.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. This is still one of my favorite Marriage Law challenge responses. I did enjoy the Potions trick class. Just like something that our Severus would do. Thanks for writing; I\'ll patiently await more.