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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17...... Sounds like the holidays maove ove to be quite a \'giving\' season for Hermione & Severus!!! I think it will do Hermione a lot of good knowing how Ginny feels about her relationship!!! Looking forward to chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
person nesscafe
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great! Every update they get just a little bit closer and I love it! I love how you\'ve progressed the relationship slowly. Hope you\'re able to update again soon!
person snailexpress
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked this so much!! The relationship is growing so nicely...I can\'t wait to see what comes next. Bravo!!
person Jean Lamb
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a lovely story so far! I do want to be notified when new chapters come up. Thanks!
person mika
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that your story is fabulous!
Nice storyline, you tell all the little details (I love McGonall as an artist), your Harry & Ginny are not cheesy, and Severus is just fabulous. I think he is quite in love with her (was maybe even interested before) and holding back...
anyway, lots of congrats!

person Stellar Snape
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is fabulous so far! I\'m sorry I didn\'t review each individual chapter, but I couldn\'t stop once I started. I feel quite lost now that there aren\'t anymore chapters loaded. :o) You definitely pulled me right in.

My only complaint is that you are spelling Professor Flitwick\'s name incorrectly. In each of your chapters you are putting his name as \"FLINTWICK\" not \'Flitwick.\' Just a little thing, but it was bothering me.

In any case, the story is absolutely wonderful and I look forward to more immensely! Please post to WIKTT when you update.
person crissy
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
they are so romantic! so abosolutely cute! i hope you post more soon.
person Nocturnus
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Been 3:15 AM in a week day, I must be sleeping (A working mum should take care of her sleeping habits) but I need to tell you how much I love your story. Is consistent, with a good atmosphere, well shapped charachters and interesting dialogues. With a propoer pace, the plot is developing in the right direction.

I just can
person spaz141
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m all a flutter, thanks.
person WizardingAngel
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter and s ges getting hoter by the minuet.............Wonder wha they are going to be doing over the holidays............as always keep up the great work